9529_Wuet

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If You like Evil novel and not know about this community You should join now Dark novel community https://discord.gg/zQwjZjw4 Why There are some Evil protagonist novel here even some Author here

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1 years ago
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Maybe when you are verifying you should enter privacy and safety in discord and choosing do not scam

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1 years ago
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Thank for the chapters

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1 years ago
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Hello, sorry to disturb the time, is there a problem when you try to enter the dark novel community or you really don't intend to re-enter?

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1 years ago
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Good 👍

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1 years ago
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Thank you for the chapters

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1 years ago
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Thanks for the chapter

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1 years ago
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Of course no author because I don't read stories like that very often I usually only read evil genre novels that don't have romance or harem

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1 years ago
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That bad

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1 years ago
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Hello writer As you requested I will give feedback about this novel and give criticism that might help the writer My first reaction when I saw this novel was I'm happy because someone else is making a novel with a villain theme without romance or Harem on a webnovel But after reading the first chapters there are some feelings of disappointment that I have in this novel The main problem this novel has is bad grammar mistakes No need to go too far. In the first chapter I just read I saw a lot of misspellings and errors with a lot of grammatical errors Some examples I saw 1. That's out if the question then (that's of not if ) 2. Instead go back home ( so he went back to his house ) that's all from me sorry if there are mistakes and thank you to the author for spending his time to make a Villain novel And I hope the author learns more English and last suggestions for writers, try to practice writing more often, hope it helps