DaoistwMyHV8

The author's style is unique, and he is still laying the groundwork in any way he can. I enjoy stories that last a long time, and this is one of them. I can't wait for more now that the tale is starting to make sense. The trope is good, but the execution is lacking. Yet it is still good. The story progressed slowly. For character design, there are some confusing points in which the author promises that things happen for a reason so that the MC might have more reasons why he had that kind of personality. The world background is provided briefly, and the writing quality is decent.

the start is good and i like how this story goes. some hint of evil mc, i want it hahaha tho it would ruin if mc is stupid, just hoping he's not

perhaps? tho what i mean is for improvement of the book. but it can connect there, like the host

so there's still a room for improvement

the world was slowly introduced so there's no problem with it. the concept was unique, however, it was cliche at first but when I read it it was something uncommon and well planned. the author really keep up and I liked it how he decided to make the chapter longer