Velterian

Thanks for the story! __MD is one of the few stories that I have really followed from the start all the way to the end, and I really enjoyed it. __I really liked all the interactions between the characters and the main trio especially, even when they acted in frustrating but believable ways. By extension, the one thing I didn't really like i think is having Kaori being absent for so long, and then losing her memories of her time unconscious. __Seeing all the characters - and especially Ash - grow throughout the books was great, and it's sad that we won't see them anymore. __If there's one character I disliked, I'd say it's Keiko's grandmother. I feel like she was maybe a bit too one-dimensional, but there aren't any others that really come to mind. __Overall, thank you for the amazing story, and I'll definitely be checking out your next story (and trying to catch up with AA)... Though I probably won't do the same comment every chapter as for this one.

Thanks for the chapter! __So Kaori is going back to her university. As she said she probably doesn't really need to, but it's not a bad idea. Though it's going to get annoying with her pregnancy. __Keiko actually took charge of the Compound in order to change at least some of the stupid traditions they have. Hopefully it'll work, they'd be much better if they weren't so stupidly against their own magic. Though I think she's severly underestimating the time it'll take for them to accept magic. __And Ash is having some fun with the maids. I am not that surprised honestly. Still I hope that they can do something for the damage she caused herself with that dark spell, she really deserves more than "just a few years" after all she did. __Luvine is cute as usual.

Thanks for the chapter! __Well that was something. __So Kaori is still somewhat intimidated by Sinneah huh. I guess she didn't have much time with her either, but it'll probably get better once they've lived in the same house for some time. __And well, the three maids certainly have their work cut out for them. And it's unlikely to be the last mess of that type too, though maybe not quite as big the next times.

Thanks for the chapter! __Well, Keiko and Yumi are just slightly attracted to each other... just a bit. And Sinneah is even more shameless than Ash, and that's saying something. __I guess now Kaori and Yumi will know each other a lot better. __This is going to get wild next chapter.

Thanks for the chapter! __A nice quiet chapter where they get to relax is always nice, and they very much deserve it too. __Ash may end up being needed sometimes, but they should have already killed most of the high leveled Nightmares out there, so others should be able to take care of what's left. __Kaori is definitely not losing any time in getting drunk.

Thanks for the chapter! __Well that's a fun scenario that Kaori thought of... and a pretty likely one too. The new maids are going to have a lot of work if that party goes as wild as it can. __And Ash may not be the best with words, but she does have other ways to show Keiko how much she cares for her.

Thanks for the chapter! __Well, seems the manor was a good investment, it seems like it's a really nice place. Also Ash immediately went for the loot, but I'm not sure they'd want to use what she found. __That conversation was super wholesome, and I'm glad that they were able to have it and not keep it in the back and ends up causing problems. Plus it shows a lot of growth on Kaori's part, which is really nice.

Thanks for the chapter! __Keiko does have a point that she's going to need something to do. As we already saw before with her pregnancy, she's not someone that can just stay doing nothing for long periods of time. __And Kaori actually asks Keiko to talk, let's hope that it goes well (though I don't really doubt it will, both Ash and Kaori really love Keiko, so there's nothing to worry about on that point).

Thanks for the chapter! __And it looks like it's Keiko's turn to suddenly feel insecure. She's severely underestimating how much the other two care about her though. __At least the others seem to have noticed that she wasn't feeling too great, so she just need to actually open up when they ask her.

Thanks for the chapter! __They both agreed, so they're (unsurprisingly) going with that plan... after a few weeks of rest and "normal" dating stuff, insofar as they can actually do normal with Ash in the mix. __And honestly they all deserve some time to rest and relax a bit after all that happened.