antoblackdeath

LV 2
2021-05-26 đã tham gia Global
Huy hiệu 3

Moments 12
antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath
3 years ago
Commented

very good so far i like to see how the rest of the story goes

antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath
3 years ago
Commented

i second that this has alot of potential to become great

antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath
3 years ago
Commented

that's was a loving chapter thank you and keep up the good work

antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath
3 years ago
Commented

keep up the great work :)

antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath
3 years ago
Commented

great 1st chapter the main character starts at humble beginnings has to get every advantage possible to stay alive and grow all and all thank you

antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath
3 years ago
Commented

hi like the story but just a little criticism the sentence of a the new demigod you should take out either the or a that way the words would fell smoother anyway thanks for your hard work

antoblackdeath
antoblackdeath