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I thought you were a different kind of author, but now i see you are just another immature author that can't handle criticism.
{ Shows too much skin to use their quirk, unless she's going to be naked as her hero costume it's best she finds a way to improve it to make anything possible to create through her hands. Then again showing her bra to the opponent may distract them enough to allow her to create whatever she wants. } Everybody looked at Momo as she started tearing up.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
' Then again I can live without it, as far as I can they're not crushing and obsessing over me in this world, I'm actually a little glad. I won't have a 2nd Sakura. ' Sasuke smiled happily, changing his expression back to looked towards Momo and spoke.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
The second part of the paragraph was unnecessary
" Hey Nice to meet you, my name's Sasuke Uchiha, feel free to call me Sasuke. Even if we don't interact much in the future I'd at least like to be acquainted. " Sasuke said giving his hand to her which she shook.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
" Is anybody else as badly injured as Jiro? " Sasuke asked as he cut Jiros shirt but made sure nobody could see her bra, " I'm sorry. " Sasuke said before putting his hand on her boob to start healing it as best he can.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
" Hey! You got to be the manliest man to admit if someone's good looking! " Kirishima said proudly.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
With 4 inherited memories why is he so immature?
" You're all very loud first thing in the morning, you're giving me flash backs. " Sasuke said remembering a pink headed girl that gave him goosebumps. He shook his head before walking to his seat between Jiro and Momo.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
Then why bakugo is still there? He is a criminal that bullied young midoriya through most of his childhood
" Now tell me, why did you decided to do this to him, which could be counted as either Bullying or attempted murder which will get you expelled or even sent to jail. " Aizawa said seriously.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
She doesn't wear bra
{ Shows too much skin to use their quirk, unless she's going to be naked as her hero costume it's best she finds a way to improve it to make anything possible to create through her hands. Then again showing her bra to the opponent may distract them enough to allow her to create whatever she wants. } Everybody looked at Momo as she started tearing up.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
Boring, if you couldn't think of a good weakness, don't write anything Please don't ruin momo costume
{ Shows too much skin to use their quirk, unless she's going to be naked as her hero costume it's best she finds a way to improve it to make anything possible to create through her hands. Then again showing her bra to the opponent may distract them enough to allow her to create whatever she wants. } Everybody looked at Momo as she started tearing up.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
" My names Kyoka Jiro, you can call me Kyoka but Jiro is easier to say. " Jiro explained as she let go of his hand.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
" My name is Momo Yaoyorozu, please call me Momo. I hope we get closer in the future and become great friends. " She smiled warmly.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
" Hey Nice to meet you, my name's Sasuke Uchiha, feel free to call me Sasuke. Even if we don't interact much in the future I'd at least like to be acquainted. " Sasuke said giving his hand to her which she shook.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
Is there going to be romance or is it going to be like a jp-romcom harem?
' Then again I can live without it, as far as I can they're not crushing and obsessing over me in this world, I'm actually a little glad. I won't have a 2nd Sakura. ' Sasuke smiled happily, changing his expression back to looked towards Momo and spoke.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869
This novel should be in the fan-fiction section with how much the author is copying the manhuas with the same setting, don't you have ideas of your own author? It's a good novel but if you know the manhuas it becomes difficult to read
So I just said, "I just had a feeling and absorbed some spiritual energy before reaching this level."
Wasting Money to Become an Immortal
Eastern · DXHaseoXD
So with a cough, I said, "Li ZI, you have to remember that when a man chases a woman, he has to be shameless to succeed. What I did just now wasn't even considered as shameless as you might think."
Wasting Money to Become an Immortal
Eastern · DXHaseoXD
As I leaned forward, I fell to my knees and reached my arms out to grab Liu Ao Xue's leg before saying, "I'll be depending on master to protect me from now on! I'll grab tight onto these big legs!"
Wasting Money to Become an Immortal
Eastern · DXHaseoXD
Another thing copied from the manhua
How much to be your disciple?
Wasting Money to Become an Immortal
Eastern · DXHaseoXD
I just looked at her and calmly said, "I promise that I will never force you to follow an order and you are free to say whatever you want in front of me. I will only treat you as an equal and not as an inferior if you work for me."
Wasting Money to Become an Immortal
Eastern · DXHaseoXD
I just pleaded not to change the costume frome the canon and he answered with an "explanation" and unnecessary insults(like the comment I'm answering) , so i stand my point that the author is just a man-child. P. S: This is the last comment i give to the author, I won't waste time on insignificant persons, unless he erases my comments like the immature person he is.
MHA: Sasuke Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Unknownking6869