I'm impressed at how you've developed the plot and story thus far. it wouldn't be a bad idea to stress the store and his growth more though imo. I like the romanticized aspects, though, and how his fury is his greatest strength. well written 👏
ignore the haters, keep reading and enjoy what I like. amazing how ignoring other people's opinions works
Has great potential. 👍 don't start slacking
this is why I stopped buying privilege chapters... not frequent enough chapter releases and then vague disappearances of the author for long periods of time...
love the consistency of chapter releases! keep it up!
I'm so happy to see such constant content again! love this novel! please release more in batches and mass! So glad there's not too much filler but feel free to skip some more useless details!
I still really like the direction it's going, but please less filler writing and more core material...
it's getting very frustrating with all this filler. I have ko intentions of buying any more chapters if it's gonna be sighing and exaggerating for 8 pages... either have more considerable content or I'm done buying. this is ridiculous
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
I have read many, many, many novels and have developed somewhat of a varied opinion of how character building, empire building, etc, usually goes. This MC, for being the kind of person he is, not upgrading everything about himself constantly, particularly skills and such, is truly frustrating. Why wouldn't he spam his swordsmanship to A or S rank knowing he was heading to a war; or ask the system about how to get and/or make titles for conquering and building? there are several factors missing here in that regard, and I'd love it if that could be addressed... I actually really like where this book is headed, but I'd feel like a liar if I gave it anything higher until things improve. Author, you've got a great style of writing. Please adjust some of your grammar and at least give some more insight as to why he's not farming through skill upgrades because that's bugging me to no end... I look forward to your progress!
Lord Evolution: Starting With SS-rank Skills
Fantasy · Deathsketcher