i recommend that you alter the 2nd to last paragraph, the one that says that she can already level up as that is no longer true with the new stats.
I edited Elizabeth's earnings stats in chapter 5. I used Bell's stats as a basis and also, which I thought was fair with the x5 buff. Take a look and tell me if it's better now and if I should continue at this pace, please.
Danmachi - The Queen of Destruction
Anime & Comics · Merezinea
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Reincarnated In Dxd As The Twin Of Sirzechs
Anime & Comics · Unhonored
Black Clover
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Reincarnated In Dxd As The Twin Of Sirzechs
Anime & Comics · Unhonored
+1
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Reincarnated In Dxd As The Twin Of Sirzechs
Anime & Comics · Unhonored
This is just chapter 3 repeated.
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I saw the name "Benedict Foley" and couldn't help thinking of Bennett Foddy.
"Welcome!" he said. "Welcome to a new year at Hogwarts! First, I am pleased to welcome a new teacher to our staff this term. Welcome, Professor Benedict Foley, who has kindly agreed to fill the position of this year's Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher."
Hogwarts Emerald
Book&Literature · Dragonel23
ninjaed
[Mc Image] (cover page)
HS DxD : Murim Reincarnation
Anime & Comics · lord_of_9Circle
Could you add the images to the paragraph comments please?
[Mc Image] (cover page)
HS DxD : Murim Reincarnation
Anime & Comics · lord_of_9Circle
"I know the pieces fit 'cause I watched them fall away~"
"... Because they're one and the same. The lonely girl is the one who gives life to the young mistress. And the young mistress is the one who protects the lonely girl when life gets too tough. The young mistress is the yang to the lonely girl's yin. But together, they both make up the beautifully complex woman named Yu Wu."
Of Foxfire and Cultivation (A Kitsune Young Master DxD Fic)
Anime & Comics · Daddy
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Rossweisse (if you know, you know ; )
SAO: Strawberry Bunny
Anime & Comics · Ignavia_Ursa