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Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
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terimakasih ❤️❤️❤️ dukung terus karyaku ya dengan cara kasih power stone atau hadiah ❤️❤️❤️

Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
Commented

terimakasih❤️❤️❤️ dukung terus karyaku ya dengan cara kasih power stone atau juga bisa kasih hadiah ❤️❤️❤️

Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
Posted

blurb nya keren jadi penasaram banget dan bisa buat narik pembaca. nama tokohnya juga bagus bagus sangat menggambarkan karakter para tokoh karakter tokohnya juga kuat kuat. bab pertama udah bikin merinding aja nih saran aja kalau nama orang jangan huruf besar semua

Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
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wkwkwkw

"Tahu gak suka darah, kenapa masih bertahan di SMA Elang? Ngelawak lo?" Balasnya sinis.

Bambang's Revenge

Bambang's Revenge

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Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
Posted

bagus ceritanya ka.bab pertama udah bikin pembaca penasaran. langsung ada konflik itu bagus. saran aja coba belajar dialog tag lagi. mana yang harus pake kapital dan mana yg nggak. semangat terus ka👍👍👍

Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
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👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
Posted

keren banget ceritanya ka. bahasanya juga ringan dan penggambaran latar dan lain lain juga bagus bgt. berasa kaya nonton film. keren banget pokoknya❤️

Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
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I need you to shine in the light yadil1_yadil

Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
Posted

wih cerita fantasi keren bgt ka bingung juga harus milih cinta di dunia fantasi atau Duna nyata ide ceritanya keren bikin penasaran😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Yadil1_yadil
Yadil1_yadil
2 years ago
Posted

keren banget ceritanya baca sinopsisnya aja udh sedih bikin penasaran banget😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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  • THE BILLIONARE'S CONTRACT FIANCE original

    THE BILLIONARE'S CONTRACT FIANCE

    Urban CEO BADBOY

    Selena lives with her boyfriend. Selena is in charge of paying the rent while her boyfriend Cody tries to make ends meet. Selena works at a bar to try to pay the rent. While at the bar because her mind is in turmoil due to thinking about the rent. Selena becomes very careless. Eventually she is fired by her boss for breaking a glass at the bar. When she returns home, Cody suddenly disappears and leaves a message. If Cody is sick of being in love with Selena. Because Selena is poor. Selena is devastated. That night she gets a call from the loan company. If Cody borrowed money on behalf of Selena. Selena would have to pay off a huge debt. A debt that she didn't even know she had to pay. Five hundred thousand dollars had to be paid in less than a week. not less than a week. Cristian, a handsome and wealthy man, suddenly helps Selena, who is being beaten by her ex-boyfriend, Cody. Because of that incident Cristian helped Selena. The man offered her a job. Selena accepts the job. The job of being a contract wife. That's when Selena's life changed one hundred and eighty degrees. Married to a wealthy man who was arrogant but sometimes very spoiled. Selena was very frustrated to be Cristian's contract wife. But one event after another brought their hearts closer together. When they want to be serious about their marriage and want to have children. Suddenly, Cristian's father Mark finds out about Selena's lies. Selena and Cristian divorced. Because the relationship was not approved by Mark. Until a few months Mark found out that Selena was the person who had saved his life. Finally Mark decided to remarry Cristian and Selena. Selena and chirstian's lives are finally happy.

    28 Chs 2 sưu tầm

  • HIGH SCHOOL LIFE AND LOVE original

    HIGH SCHOOL LIFE AND LOVE

    Teen BADBOY SUPERSTAR

    "Devano has a math lesson today! You can't be late for school!" "Yes Papa, Devan understands," answered Devan while eating peanut butter bread with gusto. "Oh yes, don't forget that there is a modeling school in the afternoon too. You have to go Devan!" said the mother who was busy with her cell phone. "Daddy go first, Devan, study properly at school, okay?" Papa said then left the dining room carrying his cell phone. While the mother also finished with her food and got ready to go to the office. "Come on, hurry up and finish your meal Devan. Don't be late for school!" Mamah said then kissed Devan's cheek briefly. Devan is now alone in the dining room. As usual in the morning every day. He snorted in annoyance and took his bag as he said goodbye to his bi inem household assistant. Devan leaves the house in his car. He is in the third grade of high school, already has a private car. Devan immediately drove quickly so as not to be late for school. His face looks flat. There was a feeling of hatred that could not be expressed in his heart. When I got to school, my first lesson was math. Dean really didn't like it at all. He was only demanded by his parents to get good grades. "Today, I want to announce my math score," said a math teacher firmly. "Duh, what's my score," said Riri worriedly who sat behind Devan. "Ah, you don't have to worry. You must have scored 90 or not 80. I'm the one who's worried. I'll definitely get a five, oh, I'm really stupid," Zahra said with a sullen face. "It's really noisy in the back," Devan said with annoyance in his heart. He propped his chin with his palm as he watched the math teacher. "You want to announce the best grades in our class," said Pak Suryo while looking for a sheet of paper on the table. "The best score for yesterday's test was Riri Alisa Ningrum. Congratulations, Riri. Where's Riri?" asked Mr. Suryo, the oldest teacher among all school teachers. "Huh? How come? Why not me?" asked Devan confusedly in his heart. His face looked so panicked. Several students saw Devan in whispers. "That's really odd, Devan doesn't get the best grades. Usually he always gets the best marks for math tests," "Yeah, this is really weird," "Just look at his face, he looks really worried. I'm really sorry," Devan heard that. He was so fed up. He could not accept that he had to accept defeat like this. "Sir, this is Riri, sir. Sit in the corner!" Zahra exclaimed Riri's best friend. "Duh, I'm embarrassed to come to the front," said a white-skinned girl with natural red lips. He looked so happy and embarrassed at the same time. "Hurry up there. Pak Suryo is already waiting for you," Zahra whispered while pushing Riri's arm. "Come on Riri! Go ahead, sir, I have a present for you," said Pak Suryo kindly. Riri walked forward and at that time Devan's gaze was very scary when he saw Riri's back in front of him. "Here, as usual. You gave a pen to the student who got the best score on the math test," said Pak Suryo, handing over the gold-colored pen. "Yes, even though the pen doesn't cost much. But let's just say it's a real gold pen, OK?" said Mr. Suryo, laughing, making several students laugh while covering their mouths. "Thank you very much Pak Suryo," said Riri bowing politely while accepting the pen as a gift. When the first break has taken place. Riri and Zahra were eating in the cafeteria with gusto. "Very funny, Mr. Suryo. Giving gifts like this," Riri said, looking at the pen she was holding. "Yes, to keep memories, when we're not here anymore. It's a really good pen. It's like an old-fashioned concept," Zahra said, pretending to know the gold color of the pen. How come, you're so lucky you can beat Devan. Only this time! You learned the speeding system last night, didn't you?" Zahra said laughing but unfortunately Naynia choked and coughed. Here, drink this," the girl with the ponytail gave her a glass of water to her best friend.

    16 Chs 3 sưu tầm

  • I LOVE YOU LINA original

    I LOVE YOU LINA

    Urban SWEETLOVE LOVEAFTERMARRIAGE NOROMANCE

    Once finished riding the bus, Lina walked to her house. With hot weather, the sun appears very hot. Walk for about ten minutes over the bridge which is the main road there. You walk by yourself and you see that there are motorbikes like that crossing the bridge area full of vehicles, indeed the bridge is very busy, especially if in the afternoon people come home after work, it is full of motorbike bells or cars that can't wait to cross. Ears are often covered so as not to hear the voices of people who scream impatiently. After that, we reached the alley of the house and Lina entered the house, where at that time there was a mother sweeping the yard. "Hey, I'm already home, my son is here, I want to say hello first," said Mama like that with a beautiful smile that appeared on her face. Hmm, I was so happy when I came home there was a smile from my mother who was directed at me. "Yes maah, I just got home" replied Lina "oh why is his face so sullen why son?" said mamah "yes, the problem is that it's hot to use the public transportation, that's it, the bus brother is really annoying. I said get off instead, just walk, right? It should be close to the house, even further away, because my brother makes me tired," said Lina at that time with a face full of sweat on his face at that time did not even wipe left just like that. "Yeah, it's okay, don't you use public transportation every day, you see, do you have friends who use public transportation every day, don't you get tired of the heat every day too? Yes, it's hot instead, you have been complaining that day," said mom "Yeah, he's the one, I've never been, it's only natural what can you do, people are really hot and tired" Lina said while grumbling "Okay, yeah honey, I'm sorry, Mom and Dad, I've made you tired like this, come on, let's eat, okay?" said Mamah gently Lina just nodded and entered the house to get ready to change clothes and eat right then and there. He took off his black shoes and socks and went to the bathroom to clean his dirty hands. And immediately took a plate to put the rice and side dishes while saying "ah! Fortunately, when I got home I was starving like this. Fortunately, there was also food that my mom cooked quickly, right at the time I came home, yes, even though I came home a little later, I really felt hungry and could hold it down. I don't eat outside, ah, it feels like I have to save really much," I said at that time while taking the side dishes. The menu at that time was vegetables with sour sauce and also fried tempeh chicken heeuh I really felt like I was enjoying it at that time with the hot weather. I ate the hot and sour vegetables right away, carefully, of course, and the chili sauce that I rubbed earlier with fried tempeh was really delicious! I don't forget to buy my favorite chocolate milk ice at the shop next to a simple house, maybe, but I have often bought chocolate milk ice. said the owner of the stall "laaah, you know, yes, just ice milk, don't do anything else, I don't know, sis, if anything else makes you sick to your stomach and coughs, compared to ice milk, it doesn't have any effect at all," said Lina at that time to the lady of the stall, namely shop owner who already knows Lina. "Oh, I see, Lin, if you're used to it, you don't have a stomach ache, maybe your stomach is Lina, who really can't drink drinks that are cheap like this" said Ms. it's a little different, isn't it normal to drink that one, ma'am, so I don't have a stomachache, if the other one doesn't have an effect, it's normal, so yeah, I'll drink it anyway" Lina said "oh I think it's the same" she replied "Okay miss make it ""

    14 Chs 0 sưu tầm

  • NOTHING LIKE US original

    NOTHING LIKE US

    Teen

    ...

    6 Chs 0 sưu tầm

  • I NEED YOU TO SHINE IN THE LIGHT original

    I NEED YOU TO SHINE IN THE LIGHT

    Urban

    5 Đã hoàn thành

    Pertemuan pertama yang membuat seorang Aslan khan terngiang-ngiang selama semalaman. Saat itu pria dengan setelan jas berwarna abu abu yang begitu rapi sedang mengendarai mobilnya dengan kecepatan rendah di sebuah jalanan kota yang terlihat tidak terlalu ramai. Tiba-tiba dirinya di kejutkan oleh seorang wanita yang masuk ke dalam mobilnya, saat ia berhenti memarkirkan mobilnya untuk membeli minuman di supermarket. Perempuan yang bersembunyi itu bernama Jihan karbella. Seorang blasteran Turki dan Eropa. Wanita yang memakai gaun lengan terbuka dan panjang di atas lutut itu gemetaran dengan mata kirinya yang lebam dan bibirnya berdarah. Saat Aslan akan menanyakan apa yang terjadi dengan gadis itu. Tiba tiba saja gadis itu langsung pergi keluar dari mobilnya. Lalu segera berlari menyebrang dan memasuki bus yang berhenti di depan halte. Tidak di sangka ternyata Aslan kembali bertemu dengan Jihan di toko roti. Saat itu Aslan melihat Jihan dengan pakaian sexy. Jihan membeli beberapa roti lalu keluar dengan di jemput sebuah mobil van. Aslan terus mencari siapa sebenarnya Jihan. Setelah seminggu ia tahu bahwa Jihan membutuhkan bantuannya untuk kabur dari sang ayah. Berhasilkah Aslan membawa pergi Jihan dari sarang kegelapan milik ayahnya?

    243 Chs 76 sưu tầm

  • MALAIKAT HIDUPKU original

    MALAIKAT HIDUPKU

    Teen

    novel ini sudah terkontrak di aplikasi fizzo. jadi jangan baca ini ya karena isinya acak acakan. karena nggak bisa di hapus

    30 Chs 18 sưu tầm

  • I NEED YOU TO STAY original

    I NEED YOU TO STAY

    Urban ACTION ROMANCE

    The first meeting that made an Aslan khan ring through the night. At that time the man in a gray suit that was so neat was driving his car at low speed on a city street that didn't look too crowded. Suddenly he was surprised by a woman who got into his car, when he stopped to park his car to buy drinks at the supermarket. The woman who was hiding was named Jihan Karbella. A mulatto Turkish and European. The woman who was wearing an open sleeved dress and long above the knee was trembling with a bruised left eye and bloody lips. When Aslan was about to ask what had happened to the girl. Suddenly the girl immediately went out of the car. Then immediately ran across and entered the bus that stopped in front of the bus stop. Unexpectedly, Aslan met Jihan again at the bakery. At that time Aslan saw Jihan in sexy clothes. Jihan bought some bread and then came out with a van picked up. Aslan continues to search for who Jihan really is. After a week he knew that Jihan needed his help to escape from his father. Did Aslan manage to take Jihan away from his father's den of darkness?

    50 Chs 2 sưu tầm

  • AKU HANYA INGIN IBU original

    AKU HANYA INGIN IBU

    Teen

    Riri adalah seorang gadis sekolah menengah ke atas yang hanya tinggal bersama ibunya. Kedua orang tua gadis berkulit putih ini berpisah sejak dua tahun lalu. Peristiwa itu membuat hubungannya dengan sang ibu menjadi buruk. Bahkan mereka tidak banyak menghabiskan waktu untuk sekedar curhat dengan mengutarakan isi hati masing-masing. Disisi lain Riri merasa bersyukur mempunyai sahabat yang setia menghiburnya. Sahabat yang tergabung dalam satu band. Dan kebetulan Riri menjadi seorang vokalis dari bandnya. Pada suatu waktu sebuah kejadian yang membuat seisi gedung sekolah panik. Gempa disertai stunami melanda kota seketika. Beruntung Riri dan sahabatnya bisa terselamatkan dari bencana alam itu. Namun Ibu Riri hilang dan belum dapat ditemukan. Pencarian Ibu Riri terus dilakukan oleh semua pihak. Akankah Riri menemukan sang Ibu tercinta?

    1 Chs 13 sưu tầm

  • PRINCESS ERN original

    PRINCESS ERN

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE

    There was a young girl named Hyun Ern who had snow-colored skin and beady eyes. Those eyes had foresight in seeing for something that might be happened in the future. Her undesired ability almost made her killing herself because she couldn’t control it. Even people around her threw hate toward her because they thought she was a weird girl. Time went by and Ern turned into a stoat. Mustela Erminea is its Latin name from short-tailed weasel. Erminea is the smallest species in its family. Hyun Ern could turn into a stoat if she got herself injured and bleed. If her wound got treated, she could turn back into human form. But her life changed since she met a jerk but charming guy, Justin. Thanks to his good-looking face and his wealthy parent, he became so famous in school. Hyun Ern fell in love with Justin after his affection melted her heart. Then, Justin tried to solve the riddle of Hyun Ern could turn into a stoat. They both suffered in difficult times to keep their love. Can they keep lasting in hard times solving the riddle?

    12 Chs 3 sưu tầm

  • KISAH CINTA PUTRI MUSANG DAN MANUSIA BIASA original

    KISAH CINTA PUTRI MUSANG DAN MANUSIA BIASA

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SWEET PRINCESS

    4.99 Đã hoàn thành

    Hyun Ern seorang gadis muda dengan kulit putih dan mata kecil yang bisa meramalkan suatu kejadian yang akan terjadi. Kemampuan yang dimiliki membuat dirinya hampir bunuh diri. Karena sering kali ia tidak bisa mengontrol kemampuannya. Bahkan orang-orang di sekelilingnya sering kali mencaci dirinya karena menurut mereka Hyun Ern adalah gadis aneh. Beberapa waktu berlalu dan saat itu Ern berubah menjadi seekor musang. Mustela Erminea adalah nama latin dari Ermine Cerpelai atau biasa di sebut musang ekor pendek. Ermine adalah anggota paling kecil dari famili musang. Hyun Ern bisa berubah menjadi musang jika dirinya mengalami luka luar dan berdarah. Jika luka itu diobati. Ia akan berubah kembali menjadi manusia biasa. Kehidupan Hyun Ern menjadi berubah saat ia bertemu dengan Justin. Pria tampan dan tengil. Justin juga populer di sekolahnya karena wajah tampannya dan ia adalah anak orang kaya. Hyun Ern jatuh cinta dengan Justin karena perhatian dari pria itu membuat Hyun Ern meleleh. Kemudian Justin mencoba memecahkan teka teki kenapa Hyun Ern bisa berubah menjadi seekor musang. Keduanya mengalami masa-masa yang sulit untuk mempertahankan cintanya. Mampukah mereka bertahan di saat sulitnya memecahkan teka teki?

    147 Chs 166 sưu tầm