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I'm hyped, no cap. But I worry a burnout, unless...

Now, THIS is first person. It's chaotic and lacks enough details to emphasise MC's panic and your sleep deprived self. Heh. Seriously though, you got to balance the monologues and biased situation details that come from a FPP narrative. You'll get the hang of it if your other four works are anything to go by.

Sorry for seriously wasting your time. This will be my last comment here. Gimme a final chance! I checked the wiki. There are 10 mentioned dragons. 1 of them is Ophis clone. Apocalypse dragon- Dreams. Ophis, Ouroboros dragon- Infinity. They are gods as I had read and could create body, bless others, shapeshift and much more. None of the other dragons could do that. Stronger than gods. Albion- Absorb and divide incoming attack. Ddraig- Multiply and transfer own power. Heavenly dragons. Just 2. More or less strong as gods and satans to kill them. Yu-long- shapeshifting through eating, and dragon aura. Midgardsormr- wise and a great sleeper. Not much about these two. Fafnir- power negation through aura, self replication and treasure summoning. Berserker mode. Vritra- power absorption, transfer, and negation. Darkness manipulation, tentacles, and curse souls. Tiamat- not much is known except weaker than heavenly category but strong enough to scare Ddraig Has a horde of treasure. Referee/dimension manager of… that game devils play. Has a strong presence And has Chaos Karma title. TL;DR Treasure summoning. Berserker mode. Shapeshift. A power to keep space stable? Ice like that general with ice blood(I don't remember). Chaos Karma? Some kind of damage/power cancellation. Bad luck debuff for others like a soul curse. Definitely strong and tanky. Aura kinda like bleach and physical enhancement through ice kinda like HxH. That's all. I'll just let you cook now. Again, I apologise for the annoyance.

So, something powerful yet different and same as the Primordial sea, creation and probability shifting? Nihility. Well, not exactly that, but the basic concept of it complementing her character and powers- cold, shrewd, weirdly comforting. . . .But, that is if one was looking for a concept. Which you are not, I just realised as I write. And it just doesn't match the DxD plot, does it? She was weaker than Albion and Ddraig but was on the top among the great five dragons. Give me a minute.

Wasn't Tiamat referred to as a sea serpent? And mother to 1st gen Mesopotamian deities? Most definitely to monsters. Then there was the tablet of destinies given to Qingu. So, Primordial sea? related power. I don't know about the mother part. Creation powers? Chaos Karma- Most definitely probably shifting powers. P.s. These are from the top of my head. please double check. And I am not an meta expert to suggest specific powers.

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That was fast!

Could not find it on my own. T_T

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