just don't make the mc arrogant on this level if he has to struggle like this whit the previous espada who are clearly more weaker, if u want the mc to behave like this then he must display whit overwhelming power , otherwise it's appears that is weaker then should be, even if he's not that is the effect that a behavior arrogant without power to back up does.
not gone lie after the upgrade whit the RM game the mc should be more dominant whit some teams.
plz no cliche like Barcelona or real Madrid, do something more original something like spurs will be nice or Liverpool.
you do understand that the ff name is path to power , not path struggle, not everyone enjoy reading weak mcs , this applies to his crew as well.
this is massive cap bro , even if it's au is still bad writing.
"I sailed the Grand Line. Big Bro Arlong and all his officers know both types of Haki, and big bro Arlong can even use their advanced forms. You and your friends won't have an easy fight", Hatchan says, assuming a stance again and coating his six swords with Armament Haki.
One Piece: I am Monkey D. Luffy
Anime & Comics · 0Luizinho0
only 5 chapters but it's already the best Naruto ff i read , love the dark souls side as well, keep it up.
the part wher people think he's not on the senior team and nobody knows who he is, by this point in the story he should be very famous in Spain , so that didn't make sense for me
man stop doing this Chinese cliches moments they are not good and not realistic, I like your work so I'm gonna be honest, just my opinion.
it doesn't matter ,this is so bad and cliche
Sasuke didn't acknowledge the praise, his face impassive as he walked back to his place, though the slightest hint of satisfaction lingered in his eyes.
Naruto: Konoha's Psychic
Anime & Comics · Hkj
this intersections whit Jude are very weird , the whole friendship was very forced.
God Of football
Sports · Art233