Deathbrick_101

Honestly if your looking for any reference for power scaling that matches his essences look into Warhammer 40k it’s much more realistic than the comic books hero’s and such and they are very tech/magic/bio- engineering of body’s to make super soldiers so those types of troops and how they categorize strength would fit for your kind of story

If I’m not mistaken this is from the Harry Potter verse right?

I would say that this is written quite well but I do need to point some things out You are having this story go too fast paced we’re the reader barely understands a character that they never knew about you have the system talk and stuff bouncing around with info and all that so it kinda overwhelms the reader. If I was writing this I would make a few changes to how your doing this first the MC is not an uncle just a nephew in his past it will take time for him to grow to be a good uncle your making him the ideal uncle right off the bat where as you should have him start out as an immature uncle like Sirius Black, another thing you might wanna change is how often the system talks to the MC is it like every action he does or have it only respond to questions the MC asks or when he does something important if the MC does not have authorization for a question just have it say one line like “Not enough authority”. I would also say that you made him too close to the Potter family right off the bat I would’ve had it start differently since if the MC goes to the multiverse he’ll only be really close to Harry and others not as much. So maybe have him adopt Harry as his own son/nephew from the Dursley’s and have him be a guide /father figure and not blood related, there’s a book that has a similar ideology on webnovel but it’s a self insert Stan Lee look alike who is an uncle to the marvel heroes and teaches and helps them when they need help following this route might be just what this story needs for it to take off fully and spread its wings.!👍 PS: Btw sorry if I was rambling and going on repeat I just think this story has so much potential to truly shine I don’t wanna see it go to waste PPS: Good luck and never stop writing how you write now might seem a little immature/novice like don’t worry about it you’re doing great for your first book so if anyone complains don’t worry and stay true to yourself “you are amazing and you are shaping a world and narrative that others cannot comprehend” so be proud with how far you’ve come.

Ahh I see the “ten years” again lol

The good ole days of lan party’s and co-op video games was the best

Cyberpunk/Star Wars Dune Avatar maybe?

How will the Starks think of him riding the sigil of their house into battle go?

Wildfire not wildlife

Kinda stopped commenting cause I’ve been pretty busy playing catch-up a bit with the chapters ngl