Arthur_Merja

One of the best endings I’ve read, it was not too sudden.

Chapters 70 through 95 were very jarring and didn’t follow the flow.

The story read well and had good potential until Hathaway. After Hathaway his logic failed and the story was ruined.

This story builds up well but ends with a time skip with unexplained events and left behind a sense of confusion.

The story reads like an outline and skips ahead. The abilities and items randomly appear without gaining them. Not a smooth read. The premise seems to be an enjoyable one though.

Unlike a lot of stories on here the ending is conclusive. There is character development plot development there is not a lot of repeat in the plot