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Author, please do not pay attention to bad reviews or opinions, there will always be people who are dissatisfied or do not like the story and that is why they make bad comments, remember that tastes are subjective, not all of us are going to like the same thing, that is why You keep making your fic, I know it's difficult to ignore the bad comments but you should do it, it only affects you if you pay attention to it, besides believe me there are more readers who like the fic, I like it so keep writing and doing a good job

but in the end you choose what to do, never ask the readers, whoever wants will read it and whoever doesn't won't.

I want to read is chapter 13, with a change of writing or not, I want to read it, without rewriting, that usually ruins the stories, it will not always be perfect but as you progress you can improve, change your writing, etc. P.S. I want to read chapter 13

If you are going to change the reading, start in the next chapter but without rewriting, you already have progress in the fic, do not start it again, improve or change your writing as the fic progresses, do not rewrite it, it will be boring and unnecessary, that's it a good fic doesn't require rewriting

have Leonard investigate the case of red john (the mentalist)

Yes, alice

Josei

The shadow clone jutsu is not an exclusive jutsu of the second hokage, most shinobi know that jutsu, they just do not use it because they do not have the required amount of chakra, I know that this jutsu was created by Tobirama Senju, but it is not exclusive to him, even a 6-year-old Itachi used the shadow clone jutsu and sent him to school

because he is a bad writer

ok, i'll leave this, bye

What happened to the Shiba Tatsuya template?

I agree, it's confusing

The Juggernaut drive is said to raise the minimum power to a satan level and the maximum would be to the level of power that the celestial dragons had when they lived, then the phoenix force has the ability to shape reality, together with that the MC is the strongest of all possibly at the level of great red, that is excessive and unnecessary power against diehauser who is far from the satan or mao class, and much further from the celestial dragon, he did it just to show off, or did you nerf the power of the Juggernaut drive and the phoenix force , and not a lower class can't do that with pure power at least, a lower class is several times stronger than a normal human, but they are not capable of destroying the world, unless they use magic to control people's minds. and cause chaos causing war etc, but they do not have the pure power to destroy the world, sirchez I do not think he has that level but he is close to that level (he is one of the strongest in the world dxd) in summary with everything that he showed MC is the strongest in the DXD universe

Don't make MC abandoned mia, please

A great fic, and an incredible last chapter, thank you, take the time necessary, we will wait for you, (although we will miss you), happy holidays, take care[img=recommend]

It's been a long time since I read this fic, for this last chapter to be disappointing.

yes, I already saw, but normally I give it a chance, and that was after I abandoned the Escanor Lannister story, and seeing that he did it again I don't plan to see anything else about him (they are the only 2 fics that I have read of this author, I didn't know who had more)

Once you abandon a story, you always will, good luck with everything, I won't read anything from you anymore, bye