good transition choice
-Within Kingsmere's Missionary-
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agreed you need something to signify the transition
lol nice can actually picture the look
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why change the name?
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The Tycoon God of Online Gaming
Games · The Heavenly Dog that Sees Beyond
ouch hopefully it heals/healed quickly
glad its not just me thought my phone was acting up refreshed and restarted for about 10 minutes before I saw your comment
major name inconsistencies draw and spending three quarters of the story explaining everyone's reaction saying the same thing draws heavily from the story. you have a great story pay closer attention to the consistency and less on filler and I'm sure you'll get better results.
I thought he was dead
"Sangyun City?" Beiming Kong's eyes slightly narrowed, flashing with a terrifying murderous intent, he coldly said, "To Sangyun City!"
Dragon God Supreme
Eastern · Seven Luan
Has this story been abandoned?
while it does sound like a good name you're almost 400 chapters in unless you intend to go back through the entire story I'd say keep it as is
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