Paki_Paki

Paki_Paki

male LV 15

tell us something about you! tell us something about you! tell us something about you!

2021-03-01 đã tham gia Philippines
Huy hiệu 9

Moments 98
Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
4 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
4 months ago
Commented

Good stuff, keep it up

Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
6 months ago
Replied to TribeOfOne

I guess in the original it must be houtian and xiantian. Those match with pre heaven and post heaven

Three realms of the Martial Path: Body Fortification, Post-Heaven, and Pre-Heaven.

Clan Leader: My strength equals to that of the entire clan

Clan Leader: My strength equals to that of the entire clan

Eastern · MoBei is MoBei

Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
9 months ago
Replied to Madsage

It's because in ancient china one hour = two of our current hours

"Because the rewards you get can be exchanged for time for cultivation in the system. The time flow of the system is three to one compared to the outside world. That means, if you cultivate in the system for three '2-hour periods', only one '2-hour period' shows as passed in the outside world."

Peerless Martial Arts System

Peerless Martial Arts System

Action · Hazy Grass

Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
9 months ago
Commented

probably Master Aunt

If they are in two different realms, for instance, a Foundation Establishment Stage Cultivator and a Qi Cultivation Stage Cultivator, the latter would call the former Master Uncle or Master Uncle.

I Can Accumulate Proficiency, Starting from Alchemy

I Can Accumulate Proficiency, Starting from Alchemy

Eastern · March of the Groping Fish

Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
10 months ago
Commented

keep it up👍

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Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
10 months ago
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Good stuff, keep it up 👍

Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
10 months ago
Commented

Good start. Keep writing I feel it's going to be even better later

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Paki_Paki
Paki_Paki
10 months ago
Posted

I've read 50 chapters so it's time for a review. I think this novel is written by a human but heavily edited by ChatGPT. Overall it's good, but some parts of it are really cringe, "power of love" and stuff like that around chapter 45. This can of stuff come very quickly with ChatGpT. Overall the story is not bad but not great either. Sure the writing quality is good but it is bearing the style of chatGPT and is sometimes too much.