I enjoyed reading this novel, the plot is more than great and kept me reading chapter after chapter. The characters are designed well and it's evident that the author put in a lot of effort into designing the main character. Only complaint which I personally don't mind but is an area which could use some improvement is the writing quality. There are very few spelling errors however there were a number of places where there was a better way of writing some sentences. If you have some time author, I would recommend going back and reading through the chapters and looking for any way certain phrases could be said better. I personally did not mind reading the novel however I am just offering a method of improvement. Overall a very good read and can't wait for more chapters.
change "hoe" to "how"
As he reached the alley turning point he started panting from the heavy run he had just done. The screams were still aloud and the mages were trying their best using their flames to keep the soldiers safe, even though they had the weapons powered by the light it was useless against the being with the long ears. The one with beautiful blonde hair like his mothers, a sign of beauty, was massacring the elves around him.. The boy looked around, only hearing the screams of the men nearby and he sat and covered his ears. The tears flooded him again as he looked at the floor, only seeing a puddle of his own sweat and his own emotional tragedy. He wondered hoe he got himself in this war, why he snuck into this village. He could not handle all the destruction. The dumb little boy who loved the wars around him was now a broken fraction of his old desires and dreams.
The Elf Prince Revival
Sci-fi · Kage007
What distinguishes this novel is the author's ability to craft vivid imagery and a palpable atmosphere through their writing. The attention to detail and careful descriptions make each scene feel immersive and transportive, while the perceptive portrayal of the characters' inner lives adds depth and complexity to the novel.
I went back through and read the first 3 chapters trying to spot any errors but I couldn't find any other than very few unnecessary ellipsis but that also was dependant on the situation. Not sure if I mixed up your novel with another one I was reading. I'll re-review your novel.
This novel is really well-made and easy to understand. The story is different from other books like it, which makes it interesting and fun to read. The way the author writes is amazing and brings the characters to life.
Thank you for your review.
Hello author. I reviewed your novel after I saw it on review swap and I don’t see that you have reviewed my novel “Conqueror of Magic” back. Please do so when possible or if you are not interested review swap I will remove my review.
Hello author. I reviewed your novel after I saw it on review swap and I don’t see that you have reviewed my novel “Conqueror of Magic” back. Please do so when possible or if you are not interested review swap I will remove my review.
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Hello author. I reviewed your novel after I saw it on review swap and I don’t see that you have reviewed my novel “Conqueror of Magic” back. Please do so when possible or if you are not interested review swap I will remove my review.
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original Villain Cultivation
A story about a child who was granted noble status from birth. Even so, even in nobility there is a hierarchy. What happens when in a world of heroes those who are at the top argue with one having more power? Helplessness. The only thing left to turn to is the darkness of this world to attain power. To regain one's pride through the utter destruction of those who humiliated them. However, what happens after that? A path of gaining forgiveness or staying true to the path of evil? Even a path completely different from these. Only time will tell. Read this novel to find all the answers you seek.36 Chs 92 sưu tầm
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Conqueror of Magic
4.82
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Read on mobile device for best experience. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Having lost his parents at a young age and not having access to a home since it had burned to the ground after a sudden outburst of flames, Arthur was taken in by the council of sorcery. Not because they had felt sympathy for him but simply due to the fact that even though his parents had been burned to ashes, Arthur did not even have a single scratch on his body. Now intrigued by the boy, the council of sorcery sent their most obedient servant; the one they call “the inspector” to relocate Arthur into a prestigious school so that his strength could bloom so that they could have a powerful ally in the future. Even so, the council of sorcery commanded that the school treated him like trash. This was because Arthur’s parents were quite powerful in their prime and as such were sought after by the council of sorcery. Even though it was an amazing offer for Arthur’s parents, they refused which invoked the long lasting rage of the council of sorcery. In a world full of factions that try to sway the tides of power to their own side, Arthur must now learn how to grow strong so he could finally find the person who had killed his parents and get revenge for the years of torment that the council of sorcery had put him through. Although he just might get quite a bit more than he bargained for. —————————————————————————————————————————— Note: This story will be quite long since there are a lot of things that need to be covered in the story. Sadly though, I’m fueled by compliments so the more people that enjoy this novel, the more I can write. Schedule plan for this novel is 2 chapters a day, 1000+ words each or if does quite well, it will be moved up to 3 chapters a day (same number of words each). —————————————————————————————————————————— Hope you enjoy this novel though, happy reading.74 Chs 161 sưu tầm
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Hero Cultivation
4.22
Julius who was born into the peak of royal families finds himself troubled as he sees himself better than everyone else. Of course what else could be expected of a prince who was given everything in life that he could ever want or need? Although he seems to have been blessed by the heavens themselves, there's a deep secret which he keeps from others. When he was nothing but a young child, Julius was abducted by a madman and forced to swallow some pill. After some other events took place, the prince's sanity was forced to crash as it couldn't endure the pain of what he saw. Never wanting to speak of that event again, Julius kept what happened that day a secret all to himself. As for everyone else in his kingdom, they were forced to stay quiet as there was something odd about the old man who had abducted Julius that no one should know about, especially Julius. … That old man was a user of magic. The last user in fact. A forbidden fighting method that was used 200 years ago and was forbidden after the Great War as it nearly caused the extinction of all mankind. All that remained for the people of the present was cultivation. In a world where Julius was sheltered from the hardships of the world, he is now forced to explore the mysteries of his world due to a sudden revelation made about his true potential. … "We have given you everything you need." "So defeat the one who's call they heed."311 Chs 3.6k sưu tầm
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My King System
4.57
Check out my new novel "Hero Cultivation"! _________________________________________ A weak to strong novel which explores the different themes of human emotion and how they react when they clash. An average human child was given all the power anyone could wish for through sheer luck. Instead of wishing for paradise or happiness, he chose reincarnation into a video game-like world. Creating a world in which only he knows information about, Yuki enters countless battles with both monsters and humans as he crushes their hopes and dreams to help himself achieve his own. My King System is an action packed novel where emotions are manipulated are manipulated by force. Conflicting ideologies are forced into contact where all reason is lost. _____________________________________________________ Author suggestions: -The first 5 chapters act as a prologue to the events which follow later on -The first 5 chapters might cause you to feel extreme anger towards the characters so while reading, imagine the events that take place from the character's perspective (this includes their age and thought process) -Going back to the previous point, please pay close attention to the characters age and environment they are in as it heavily influences their actions -The previous 3 suggestions only apply to the first 5 chapters -Once you've passed the first 5 chapters, you can enjoy the new world in which Yuki releases all his built up emotions freely _____________________________________________________ In conclusion, this is a story about an overpowered main character that has to compete with the entire world as they also try to get overpowered. _____________________________________________________ Apologies in advance if some of the synopsis didn't make much sense. Once you start reading the novel, everything will come together. _____________________________________________________ Enjoy!269 Chs 3.1k sưu tầm
This novel truly impressed me with its engaging plot and impeccable writing quality. One of the standout features of the novel was the plot, which was expertly crafted and kept me hooked from beginning to end. The author introduced a cast of complex and well-developed characters that each felt unique and placed them in a vividly described setting that felt fully realized and immersive.
Hell's One
Action · Velo_Namya