Cthulhu_2098

I’m glad to hear that you didn’t abandon your last book as I was just starting to really get into the story when I realized that it hadn’t been updated in a while. I look forward to your future writings and can’t wait to check out your new book.

I have a question, you said that this would be part of the Pause Systems Universe but the timelines in the descriptions don’t match up for the beginnings of the awakenings.

Although the story is good, you can get bored of it rather easily if you read through it extremely fast like I did. So if you’re just starting it I’d recommend that you take it slow and just enjoy the story over a long while.

This feels real rushed and I don’t think the story was put together very well.

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