Honestly I haven't read the story yet but I saw in the description that there was no romance. The fact that there is no romance and it is stated in the description and guaranteed deserves a five star review in and of itself. The yell of excitement I give when I saw that was hilarious. The amount of times I've had to stop reading a good story because they introduce romance makes me weep. So thank you Author. I dont start a story until at least fifty chapters but for this story I'm going to break that rule. I'll right another review when I catch up with the story.
I feel like Kahn needs to put Ceril in a time out after this with all this I am God talk. Let him chill out and knock him down a peg. Cerils getting a little uppity and too big for his britches.
Pouldrons = Shoulders Placard = Lower Torso/Stomach Vambrace = Forearm/Lower Arm Gauntlet = Hand/Glove Cuisses = Thigh/Upper Leg Sabatons = Boots/Feet
Before him.. Was a black and red Demonic looking armor that had multiple blistering red veins on the pouldrons, placard, vambrace, gauntlets, cuisses and sabatons.
Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
I send you a friend request. My username is Genny_E.V.I.L#4417
if you need a proofreader or an editor, I would love to help. I love your stories and would like to help keep them going and get better.
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more*?
"Shit! Help me, I need no information shit".
Ocean Master
Fantasy · GREAT
pituitary gland = a small pea-sized gland that plays a major role in regulating vital body functions and general wellbeing.
The owner felt like his brain was heavy, it felt dull like pounded yam and mashed tofu. It was a freakish comparison, but it was apt for his situation. He felt as if his pituitary gland was put on the burning fire.
Ocean Master
Fantasy · GREAT
you dont need quotation marks after every sentence
Lila stared at her kid and said, "Young Man, I've noticed your face has altered dramatically." Avoid becoming connected with those prohibited individuals. I don't give a damn if Vincent fails. I just want him to be alive and well. It's preferable to be human than to be a test subject."
Gravity Mage with Level-Up System
Fantasy · Aravind_S
I ABSOLUTELY FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY. IF YOU DONT SHUT THE FUCK UP. THANK YOU!! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
Unsealing Emptiness
Eastern · Bird_0f_Hermes