Story Line is intriGuing and pulls one in BUT there are many many tense usage errors which are distracting and dropped words and or phrases at the end of paragraphs I want the See where this story goes Hope the editing /translations to wnglish inprove
Really enjoying this story Well written and No grammer distractions Waiting for more chapters Continue feeling better
Excellent rendition of the cinderella story Combining the fairytale with space opera/fiction
Seems like an interesting story line but the small grammatical errors are off putting and distract from the readability of the story.
Theroughly aucked into this story but need more coins to keep reading when i get the time. Really really like this story but read throught the first book was great. Please help me and like this comment.
The translation is poor. Some phrases and words that may be common iN the original are not explained in the early part of the story. Portions of many sentences aw not included in my story making it difficlut to follow the fUll story.
The story line sewma good bit the yranslatio s is choppy With awkward phrasing in english.
My Clever Wife Is Sweet
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