DaoistAkYbTe

DaoistAkYbTe

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2021-01-04 đã tham gia United States
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DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
23 days ago
Posted

I couldn’t even finish reading the first chapter as the grammar is so bad.

DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
27 days ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
4 months ago
Posted

Really enjoying this book and the story is different. I just wish that the story gets updated regularly and I don’t have to keep waiting. Please update!!!

DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
8 months ago
Posted

The ending is such a cliffhanger and seems incomplete. It’s was so disappointed with the ending. I really wanted to know what happens to the main characters.

DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
8 months ago
Posted

This book is incomplete!!! I was so disappointed when I realized that the ending was not real. Not worth reading as it’s incomplete.

DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
8 months ago
Posted

Well written book and storyline was interesting. They only they was that there were so many plot lines and towards the end it seemed very rushed and things didn’t get wrapped up as well as it could have. This book seemed like it needed more chapters so that some of the plot lines could be ended better. Other than that I think the book was well written.

DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
8 months ago
Posted

I couldn’t keep reading this as the translation is really bad. The names kept changing and there was a lot of grammar errors.

DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
10 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

DaoistAkYbTe
DaoistAkYbTe
10 months ago
Commented

Hope all is well and I’m glad you are back writing. I’ve enjoyed this book so far