Surprisingly enough for a writer who writes romance novels, I don't like reading them. I love your book though so am adding to my library cause you never know you might learn a thing or two.
The book has very few chapters but with every book that you read you learn something. The book is amazing and the author did great work so I would tell her what to change it doesn't mean that the book is bad. The synopsis and the cover of the book determine if someone will be interested in the book so I would hope that the author works on making another cover and going through the synopsis to find something that will pull readers. Hope I don't disrespect you with any of this.
I don't want to drag the book at the start but if you read more you'll get what you're looking for. Happy reading.
I'll always think that the synopsis will determine if someone will give a book a try. From your synopsis am definitely giving this book a try.
Love the book. The writer's work is impeccable and would love to read more of his work. Though I have something to point out. One of my readers mentioned some time back that when the paragraphs are too long it's hard for someone to concentrate on the book they get distracted easily. Just from the synopsis, I saw that because I didn't see if there were paragraphs it was just one long chapter which might discourage lazy readers. Great work though keep up.
Love the book although I noticed a few mistakes that I would love the author to check on. The grammar has done mistakes especially punctuation marks and some words are used incorrectly. So check on the book probably with the use of Grammarly and it would help you out.
Stumbled upon the book and I already love it. I love the character design and the authors writing is impeccable. Adding it to my library and hoping to get more chapters. Would recommend.
I love this book as I do all your other books. I love the writing techniques and the way you have designed your characters. I love reading books where the female lead is not a weak character. Would definitely recommend this book.
This is a great book. If you love this genre then you should check this out. Am engrossed and I know I'll be done in no time so hoping the author will update more chapters.
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original THE CEO AND HIS LITTLE ANGEL
4.77
Anastasia Morello had turned out to be a completely different person she couldn't even recognize herself anymore. She had built an empire. She had taken advantage of every opportunity that had come her way and giving her last name it helped her a lot. She was no longer the weak insecure woman she was when she met Vincenzo. She looked at him and wondered what he was thinking of at the moment. He considered her a rival and that was how she wanted it to be. She had tried to be his pay er but all he ever did was make her look like a fool. He had stomped on her and showed her the worst of disrespect and she was supposed to stay with him? She heard the elevator ding and knew that her lawyer had arrived. She wanted to finish this business once and for all. "Are you sure this is what you want ?", Vincenzo asked her. He was sure that was what she wanted him just hoping that he was wrong. He still wanted her. He couldn't believe how much of a fool he was. "The door to her office opened and she was a bit disappointed to see it can't be her lawyer. It was Dylan Harrington instead. "Hello ", he said as he went to where she was seated and kissed her on the cheek. "Hello ", she said as he sat down next to Vincenzo. "Isn't the lawyer still here?", Dylan asked her. "Not yet ", Anna said and immediately there was a knock on the door. "Come on in ", she said. The door opened and her lawyer came in. He smiled and chuckled once he saw the two men in the office. "I didn't know both your husbands were gonna be here ", he said chuckling. "I wanted to finalize both divorces on the same day being a busy woman ", Anna said as she sat upright. "Okay then let's get to it ", the lawyer said as he took a seat.110 Chs 100 sưu tầm
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THE PERFECT LOVE STORY
I always wondered why people thought that Romeo and Juliet were great for each other . It was a terrible love story considering that they died in the end . Juliet was 13 and Romeo was a massive dick and they could have stopped alot of things from happening if they had just communicated . Maybe I was in that situation only that I was not in love with my Romeo and neither was he . It was like I was sentenced to a life of unhappiness and there was nothing that I could do to escape it . All I could do was fi dnways to escape it by making myself happy but nothing really made me happy except him. Lancelot . I could not even remember when I first started having a crush on him. Maybe when I was still a kid and I could shake it off because he looked like a sex god and I was craved of it but I couldn't do anything with him. Him being my husband's son made things a little bit complicated . Sometimes he looked too good to the point where I forgot he was married . "Hunny are you listening to me ?", my annoying husband asked from across the table .5 Chs 0 sưu tầm
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THE HUNTRESS AND THE ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE.
No one had ever thought that zombies would be the ones responsible for the end of the world. It wasn't how they had imagined the world to end. The world had turned to ruins just because of one person. Everyone was fighting for their lives. It was either you fought or you died. Morals had died as no one was there to uphold the law. Ophelia was still locked up in the room with four walks and no window. Every day she thought about how she was going to escape but couldn't remember those thoughts the next day. It was as if she was in a simulation and she had reached a point where she didn't know if it was real or not. She had no idea what was going out there in the world. The world that she longed to see so much. She didn't know that they had destroyed it. What was she? Riley had already lost hope of finding her sister because if she was alive then she would have flu d her already. As they packed their things from the camp they all hoped that they were going to find shelter. They had a heard a government facility that was working on a cure maybe that was the only way for them. They had no idea what was in store for them. Were they going to survive or were they just going to be like the other people who had gone to search for the cure and were turned into lab rats? The big question is was this all real or were they just in a simulation?22 Chs 5 sưu tầm
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DAWN.
4.9
Tear-stained cheeks, my mascara was now an ugly smudge after being ruined with all the crying I had been doing for the past hour. I could not recognize myself as I looked through the mirror. The more I stared at myself the more the tears. I could hear them in the next room. Their moans enraged me and made me feel like throwing up. I retched but nothing came out. Disgust is what I felt. My life had turned out to be a chaotic mess and I wondered what I had done to deserve all that. I was a good person or so I believed. I smiled through the pain and thought to myself that everything was going to be okay. I did not believe that myself but I had to tell myself to keep going or I would be stuck in a loop with my past trying to set myself free...177 Chs 122 sưu tầm
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HIS ENCHANTED LOVER
4.64
At twenty years old she had thought that now her life had just begun. Her childhood had been everything but good. It could have been worse but she couldn't complain about it. What was she supposed to do? The moment her life began other things arose and she had no clue whatsoever on what to believe. Her life had been a lie all along and no matter how much she tried to make sense of who she was she couldn't. She was lost at sea with all the kids she had been told. She did not know who to believe anymore. She never knew that she had as much power as she had or that people were going to see her as a threat. All she over wanted was to be somewhere that she belonged but the more that she knew people the more she realized that she did not belong anywhere. Could she blame them for hating her though? She did not choose to be who she was and there was nothing she could do about it. As she turned into her wolf form she saw a figure approaching her and she was ready to pounce until she smelled his scent. Hades23 Chs 20 sưu tầm
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The Vampire's Curse
4.89
She was not the woman of his dreams. She was rather the woman who came and turned his life upside down. Did love even exist? Why did she have to forgive him for things he did? He did not do them because he loved her. He did them because he wanted them all to herself. He didn't want to lose her and did what would benefit him. He never thought about others so why would she think about him. She was only meant to save herself. She was not some Messiah who came to deliver the world. As she looked at him all she felt was disgust. She didn't think that she loved him anymore. She didn't have a soul. He had destroyed it. His eyes raked over her body and he could not contain the lust that he felt towards her. His pupils turned dark as she ran her hands over his chest. He wanted to grab her by the throat and kiss her. Hold her under the moon and tell her how much he had been miserable since she had left but he knew that was not what she wanted to hear. The moon accentuated her curves and all he wanted was to run his hand all over her body. He knew it was not going to last. He had not seen her for over a decade and now she was back. He has thought that he did not feel anything for her but every time he looked at her he felt alive again. He wanted to let her go but couldn't and did not know why. It's like she was a drug that was in his system that he couldn't wash away. If he could go back in time he would have never met her. If he would have never met her a lot of things would have never happened. He was not her knight in shining armor the same way she was not the woman for his heart. She was the woman who made his life a living hell and he still did not understand why she still brought him to his knees every time.41 Chs 21 sưu tầm
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THE CEO AND HIS LITTLE ANGEL
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