RedBerry_Alchemist

male LV 4

I’d like to say i’ve been here before, But that was under a variety of different names. I’m here for a fresh start.

2020-12-06 đã tham gia Australia
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RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
1 years ago
Commented

Absolutely loved the chapter, It’s everything I could of hoped for in a Naruto xJ JK fic and some. As for things to spice up the Story during the Academy Arc, There was an Incident between Naruto and Iruka where I think Iruka was going to maybe try killing Naruto? I’m fuzzy on the details. But I’m sure it did happen. If not, I’m just getting mixed up with a Fic i read, but maybe add something like that in to the story and have it be when MC starts to not be so cold towards Naruto, and a few chapters where MC bonds with him. Even a Cool chapter with Naruto over for Dinner at the Nara Clan Compound would be awesome, especially if something goes down when he’s there.

RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
1 years ago
Commented

Balanced Revival Syatem. If the Main Character is going to get into trouble Like Naruto Does in the seriess, Then a way to revive the Shikigami would be best. If you want suggestions Have it be a Cooldown for their revival or a complex ritual of some kind.

RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
1 years ago
Posted

My only problem is that there aren't enough chapters to satiate my lust for a good story. The characters are amazinng in every way, and in my opinion, I haven't read such good outside of EPIC. The Story was well-developed and not rushed at all. And every single chapter was well written and worth the timee took to read. I hope with all my heart that you continue this soon, I couldn't bare to see such a well written story go unfinished

RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
1 years ago
Commented

plz update soon, I know real life can be a pain, but this is one of the stories that really helps with my own problems by giving me an escape. The writing and the story is amazing so far, and i hope you find the strength to write more chapters.

RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
1 years ago
Commented

thank you so much, I’ll make sure to disclose that in the Synopsis, hope you have a wonderful day and that life stops beating you over the head.

RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
1 years ago
Replied to Raging_Smurf

Also, like i said before I have been thinking of trying to write my own story with the same basic premise as yours, would it be ok if I do? I ask because I want to get permission to adapt your work and not just straight up steal your hard work.

RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
1 years ago
Commented

If only this wasn't dropped, I was in love with the story and would have loved to see it to completion

RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
3 years ago
Replied to Hobi_Ta

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RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
3 years ago
Replied to Afonso_Aaron

probably not, but well see how it goes

RedBerry_Alchemist
RedBerry_Alchemist
3 years ago
Replied to daniel_rahn

Thank you for the feedback

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