Didnt even recognise the song myself.
Use grammarly instead. Also from a plot standpoint this aint it boss. The guy showed his invetion to a group of ppl on the day blue stole it. How did blue pass it of as his own? And then his daughter does a 180 and fully accepts her father is evil and wants to stop him? The girl who was introduced to us as being sadistic and looking down on weaker ppl?
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This has to be AI generated.
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This story reads like a bad parody. Nothing makes sense. How did the mc get the loyalty of all the class S members? How did he communicate with them once they became trators? The mcs plan wud have been derailed if just one class S member decided to be an actual traitor cause they were all carrying out different tasks. Why is the match judge helping class A and not getting called up on it once it is revelead?
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Energybending is possible.
If you needed a character thats good at mechanics anakin is literally right there.
Meeting with onoki.
The slum woman and her child fulfilled their role. Further attempts to prolong their relevance to the story is unwarranted. They dont need to be plot armoured into Padme's entourage.
Why would you skip the most important interaction the mc has had to date.
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original Avatar: Jǫrðsaga
There is beauty in Chaos and serenity in Order. One cannot exist without the other. Each gives meaning to their counterpart, eternal rivals and eternal lovers. It’s a shame only a rare few ever come to this revelation. Most live their lives trapped in an illusion, their path to enlightenment forever cut off. A lie will forever remain a lie, no matter how sweet it is. I will not turn a blind eye to the truth of the world. It matters not what others think of me, be they family, friends, allies, or enemies. They may call me a monster, a devil, a lunatic even. But I will not bend. I will not break. I will not be forced into conformity under threat posed by the slave of Order. Because what is Order if not Chaos’ accomplice? There is only one path worth treading, and I will do whatever it takes to advance forward. For I am Sǫlmundr, Lord of the Earth. **************************************************************** Avatar series fanfic. The first volume will not have anything canon. I apologise in advance. It will be setting up the mcs background and origins. The power system in the avatar is pretty non-confrontational. You don’t have to fight for resources like in cultivation novels, so the frequency of his evil acts will be pretty spread out. This is a slow burn novel that I hope will draw readers into the world and slowly build up to whatever the climax of each arc is. I can only promise that he will always be a rational, benefits based mc. This is my first novel so tell me your thoughts or any improvements I can make. Chapter length: ≈ 2k words Updates: Once a week Alt Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51100/avatar-jorsaga45 Chs 874 sưu tầm
Dont see much point in the system. Arcane lore is rife with possiblities to give the mc whatever power u want.
Arcane: My Father is Silco
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