VRW1

VRW1

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an arthor and also an artist and working on getting an amie.

2020-11-23 đã tham gia Global
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VRW1
VRW1
1 years ago
Commented

The chapter was a good pace, and give a good picture of the story while I was reading.

VRW1
VRW1
1 years ago
Replied to HandsomeWriter

Thanks for the review. I self edit all my stuff and also it help me improve as a writer but I do reread my stuff and see the errors. I do come back and change it later on. Keep reading it. It does gets better along the way.

VRW1
VRW1
1 years ago
Commented

Lets do it.

VRW1
VRW1
2 years ago
Commented

I said west twice but the last part is the east.

VRW1
VRW1
2 years ago
Replied to RomanceFanatic028

The MC have a split personality so that why it was confusing. I going to explain later on. Thanks for the review.

VRW1
VRW1
2 years ago
Posted

The story have potential and how the set goal of which each character is going to have to overcome in the story and how the author did that in the story, but there is grammar errors, but every story have grammar errors. It give the author more room to improve and involve the creation of your storytelling. Keep it up author

VRW1
VRW1
2 years ago
Commented

Some words need to be capitalize. The story is great, but that old man is up something. Nice touch putting in shaman. A MC that is inbetween her sister and mother. The grandmother is more mysterious. The story gave potentials but grammar need to be corrected.

VRW1
VRW1
2 years ago
Commented

That knife and pepper spray going to be useless.

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Red Blood Century

Red Blood Century

Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

VRW1
VRW1
2 years ago
Commented

Don’t follow.🤦🏽

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Red Blood Century

Red Blood Century

Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

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VRW1
2 years ago
Commented

I don’t know what culture shaman come from but it can be build a lot of storytelling.

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Red Blood Century

Red Blood Century

Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

  • 39 Myths original

    39 Myths

    Sci-fi MAGIC DARK SUPERPOWERS BETRAYAL REVENGE

    In the beginning of time before the era of light. There were darkness and there were a vast empty space that were unknown until the flash of light that had created the universe. That is just one out of many clues and mysteries that had been questioned since the first time of men. Some knew while others came with other theory such as the Big Bang theory.

    37 Chs 3 sưu tầm

  • Psycho Re:Connect original

    Psycho Re:Connect

    Fantasy ADVENTURE SYSTEM DEVIL

    4.71

    What are dreams? The question we always ask ourselves. Can they come true like in the movies or fantasy? Can we have more than one girl or can we have superpowers that can make us cool or just all above? Dreams are something that can make you escape reality itself and create your own world but what if you have limits to your dreams. It Sounds crazy to believe in something that is imaginary. https://www.vrw1.com/ Go check out my website. This isn't a romance novel it is a adventure novel. I don't know why but it won't change?

    72 Chs 9 sưu tầm

  • Dual Threat Genoiss original

    Dual Threat Genoiss

    Action ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION R18 MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG DARK SUPERPOWERS TRAGEDY ISEKAI

    The goddess Gaia was the Lord of Phopect and with her twelve knights protected the lands of Phopect and its twelve lands, but soon after Gaia's tragic actions against the lands of Phopect and it had turned the lands to dust and ash and the green grass turned to white and the sky turn to darkness. The twelve knights fought over lands and hoped to claim the title of Lord of Phopect, but there is a prophecy that is foretold to have a boy name, Gilmore Saber become the Lord of Phopect.

    6 Chs 1 sưu tầm

  • The True Purity of Good and Evil original

    The True Purity of Good and Evil

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY SUPERPOWERS DEVIL

    4.24 Đã hoàn thành

    https://www.patreon.com/creator-home Link to my Patreon right here. Chapter 289 is part of Volume 12 and more update on the synopsis is coming thank you and keep reading. Long ago demons were said to be evil being but what if I tell you that demons can look at as good beings. A tale of a woman that was living among humans but has a dark path with one of the demons kings of the underworld. Vol 1 Roki was trying to figure out what happen to his family after the holy war between the angels and demons but found out that they were dead by the demons in another world. Vol 2 The Japanese arc Roki tries to figure out what Morrigan took him at and he found out that curses were overrunning the world and the gods were somewhere else but Roki got some of the gods that fought him and he travels to the nether realm to find out how to get back home. Vol 3 Celtic arc It was four months before Yoki and the others had gone to the Japanese world and found Roki. Yoki had led the other across the land and they meet up with Athena they tried to find Roki but manage to figure out Morrigan had blocked their connection from Roki and so they had to defeat her to find Roki and bring him home. Vol 4 The Battle of the Kingdoms One of the members of the House of Luck was trying to find their grandfather's notes on their enemies and Luck had found out about his great-great-grandfather holding his trident with powers that will lead him and Roki and Yoki to the past to meet the first wielder of the trident of the lost city of Atlantics. Nyxt, the goddess of ocean and war. Vol 5 Space Invasion There are the Genesis a sworn enemy of the House of Luck they are beginning to rage war on the planet. Vol 6 and 7 In this two-part Volume, there are stories about the Iron Tower that was told to be wrong but the old age is wondering about the story and the weapons that lie there but they, are not the only ones. The Phantom Dawns is after those weapons and also after the truth about the dark world also. This takes place before Roki and Yoki discover each other and also explain what happens to Bridget. Vol 8 The First Age Arc Roki sent Fei and his two sisters to the greek world and investigate Loki's whereabouts and Roki was curious about what is Third Keys and what he finds out about the dark world and the dark plains. Vol 9 The Book of Omens This is based on the Third keys sega that needs to be made by this arc and you need to read about the Third Keys book that is book 1, book 2, and also book 3 of Third Keys sega. Vol 10 Kings Tower In this arc, a boy named Gil had to climb the tower to reach the top of the floors to find his own light from the darkness and he will have help along the way. Knowing about the outside world of the Omniverse and the different realms through the tower. Vol 11 The Four Sorcerers Wong Fu, Shang Ha, Blake Viron, and Qi Chi had special powers from the stars that fall upon Earth in the middle ages due to the star power. They had lived for over 500 years and they are now living their normal lives, but then due to the Kings Tower having an abnormal being inside the Kings Tower. Vol 12 John Wicker John was a normal man living on another planet besides earth and he was living there peacefully until one day he had gotten up and he had gain power from the book of Ozzy and now he must figure out the power through him while running from his fate from the ghost king and the wolfmen. Do not own the art and the cover. I will take it down unless someone says so.

    305 Chs 698 sưu tầm

  • Third Keys Sega: Dying Light Vol 4 original

    Third Keys Sega: Dying Light Vol 4

    Horror ACTION ADVENTURE MYSTERY DARK SCARY KILLER

    Đã hoàn thành

    In the fourth volume of the Third Keys sega and there had been something that would be a different story about the others and also the zombie killer of DL aka Dying Light had made it to where the cities are overrun by the zombies of the night and Zumbi as known as the zombie king of the world and he is trying to make sure that he can kill that bastard of the zombie king and also made it to where he will experience a new journey of a fourth apostle as well. P.S. The cover is not my artwork

    32 Chs 6 sưu tầm

  • Hollow Moon original

    Hollow Moon

    Fantasy MYSTERY WEREWOLF

    There in front of her, there was a large figure with white fur and blue eyes, and it was a beast, but it was a kind and calm soul, but she could feel its pressure different from the other beast she met in the world. Holding her sword tight to her hand and her other hand filled with blood and she would look and see that the world that she believed in was so different from what she thought it was and the creatures she has seen before she would have changed her mind about this world and it will change her and the views that she believes in herself. What is the difference between creatures and humans? Are knowing about the unknowns willing that scary to know about until you see them in front of you and try to kill you, but this story is about the kingdom of Lunar. The Kingdom of Lunar is underseas and grip on by seven borders of each human kingdom and then there are the kingdoms on the outskirts of the seven and those are filled with creatures and the myth logic about the world was real and they were at war with the wolf pack the third king of Kingdom Solar.

    11 Chs 1 sưu tầm

  • The Dark Sweetest(Nightmare Edition) original

    The Dark Sweetest(Nightmare Edition)

    Teen MYSTERY REVENGE SCARY

    A girl name Candy had met a girl name,d Sophia. They were best of friends and they would always enjoy each other comfort and they would talk about the future but one day Sophia had become mean to Candy on the first day of middle school and they would always be so close but Candy was alone when it came to middle school years and every year after that. Sophia becomes popular but Candy found it overrated and she was dealing with her own problems but she didn't have a friend until one day. Sophia asks Candy to come with her and she went with her due to being so distant from each other and they soon made it to the place and then she was hurt badly by the football boys and she looks at Sophia with such rage and she swears to get her revenge. Years pass and there was no sign of Candy anywhere and so she had thought she was scar for life and so Sophia would visit her house due to greed but that was just the beginning when Sophia found out that Candy's parents were killed and hanging from the ceiling. And so the story begins from start to finish and this might just give Candy the sweetest desire and revenge she wanted. This is a remake of The Dark Sweetest but it the Nightmare Edition. So if you want to it out then go for it and support that but it only about four chapters. No rape or sex, but some of the images that I describe may be a little detail toward that direction but not too much and it will be after chapter 10.

    23 Chs 6 sưu tầm

  • Third Keys Book 3 The Gate of Kryos: Matthew original

    Third Keys Book 3 The Gate of Kryos: Matthew

    Action ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION COMEDY MAGIC VIDEOGAME

    Đã hoàn thành

    This is Book 3 of the Third Keys sega and This focus on Matthew and his point of view and these events is between Apollo and Jeremy story but this explanation on why Matthew had gone to another world and what is this new power that he has inside of him but before all that he must learn about where he is at and figure out how to get back to where he was before traveling to this unknown place. Also, the art isn't my but if someone says anything then I will keep it up and that also goes for Book 2 too.

    27 Chs 8 sưu tầm

  • Third Keys Book 2 Gate of Kyros original

    Third Keys Book 2 Gate of Kyros

    Action ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY MAGIC

    Đã hoàn thành

    This is Book 2 of Third Keys This is about Apollo's Point of view and how it affects the different parts of the world when the gate of Kryos had open and this is a three-part of the sega and this is base on the events before The True Purity of Good and Evil. After the gate was open there was chaos and destruction after Jeremy Kidd figure out the truth about the gate and Apollo had made it to where he had to protect the people that he care about and figure out his own purpose behind the gate opening and why he had to do what he needed to do and figure out the truth behind the gate opening.

    28 Chs 5 sưu tầm

  • Academy Gamers original

    Academy Gamers

    Games

    In most schools, you may have average grades and you have to study to get to the top of the class but this is different. It doesn’t take nerds to play games to be at the top of the class and in this case, there are many gamers but they must play all types of games to get into top colleges. Due to the world being mostly made up of games and a large world that built off of games. Some people called the top rank gamers, gods due to their powers in games. Troy, the world of creation and the first gamers debt that there should be order and rules whoever can be at the top of the ranks can order anyone around. Kai was last in the ranking but he had the power to be a top rank gamer but he didn’t have a purpose to climb up the ranks until the god of games, dreams, and play came and challenge any high rankers in the Academy’s to play with him.

    7 Chs 4 sưu tầm

  • The Dark Sweetest original

    The Dark Sweetest

    Teen SCARY

    A girl name Candy had meet a girl name Sophia. They was best of friends and they would always enjoy each other comfort and they would talk about the future but one day Sophia had became mean to Candy on the first day of middle school and they would always be so close but Candy was alone when it came to middle school years and every year after that.     Sophia become popular but Candy found it over rated and she was dealing with her own problems but she didn't have a friend until one day. Sophia ask Candy to come with her and she went with her due for being so distance from each other and they soon made it to the place and than she was rape by the football boys and she look at Sophia with such rage and she swear to get her revenge.   Years pass and there was no sign of Candy anywhere and so she had thought she was scar for life and so Sophia would visit her house due to greed but that was just a beginning when Sophia found out that Candy parents was killed and hanging from the ceiling.   And so the story begin from start to finish and this might just give Candy sweetest desire and revenge she wanted.

    4 Chs 1 sưu tầm

  • Third Keys Book 1 The Gate of Kryos: Jeremy Kidd original

    Third Keys Book 1 The Gate of Kryos: Jeremy Kidd

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY

    Đã hoàn thành

    A world that is filled with despair and fear. The twelve knights must figure out why the world is filled with so much despair. This long epic series is filled with mythology, Legends, and Tales that were told throughout history. The protagonists will be challenged every step of the way. They will need to figure out how to discover the truth behind why the twelve comic worlds are filled with despair. There was told in stories but they will change fate in their favor with every step they take that will save the comic worlds. Ty Frost builds a virtual world that was supposed to give people powers but when they realize that it was real then it changes everything. Artwork is not my if someone says something then I will change it thank you.

    15 Chs 10 sưu tầm