William_Dorsey

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William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
1 years ago
Commented

Even with friends, how did the MC's family get a $500 thousand dollar loan? That's more than a middle income family can afford. An average family making $50-70 thousand dollars per year might be able to buy a $250 thousand dollar house. It is more realistic to say their friends helped them get a $50 thousand loan.

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
1 years ago
Commented

Rolling on the floor laughing at the cliffhanger. About to sneak into a battlefield... sneak out to heal... only for his truthseaker and vengeance priest status to force him to go back because he swore vengeance on those who tortured him...

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
2 years ago
Posted

This is one of the best character development stories I've read on this platform. Most of the adventure stories have OP characters. This character constantly has to fight his own flaws, a story about growth in the face of failure and prejudice.

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
4 years ago
Commented

convenient measurements... the army just happens to measure ability according to his status window...

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
4 years ago
Commented

Avoid sunlight for 8 hours? Cumulative or consecutive? I reached 7 hours and 30 minutes and get hit with daylight. Timer reset to 0 minutes... Guess I can only fulfill this quest at night...

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
4 years ago
Commented

busted....What are you doing here?

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
4 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
4 years ago
Commented

Thus far, reads like the graphic book. I'm enjoying it .

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
4 years ago
Commented

Alice in wonderland said, I wonder what this bottle does?

William_Dorsey
William_Dorsey
4 years ago
Commented

Very interesting beginning .I look forward to reading this .