World building is just😌😌. And characters and their dialogues U all gonna be fans if u read till ch 5 Don't judge based on first three chapters
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World building and details are just awesome, the writing is unique and visualising, character dialogues are a bit off. I'd rate it around 8/10
Am I the only one who thinks transitions are a bit off? And a bartender mech having a plasma gun lol
This one was better compared to the previous two, honestly writing style is unique too, the setting and details on world building are awesome honestly. waiting for the further chapters.
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Pausing, Merfy turned towards Kyros with a hint of amusement in his eyes. "Taking my wins, obviously. Oh, don't worry; I won't snatch a single chip from your pile."
dieuborne- bloodline of gods
Fantasy · Dark_Sider_1892