rthreatt

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rthreatt
3 months ago
Replied to The_Odyssean

Attempting to fix drastic grammar/word issues and add details that hopefully don't take away from the feel of the novel.

rthreatt
rthreatt
3 months ago
Replied to Abi_Daulen

Uploaded first chapter, think its better but probably need to make the thoughts more natural later.

rthreatt
rthreatt
3 months ago
Replied to Abi_Daulen

No problem man, gonna write two versions of the first chapter when I get power back. One with added detail and one with just fixed grammar and see which the readers want.

rthreatt
rthreatt
3 months ago
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Liked the overall story, the various different cases, the small charcter development and pulling in different part of the cyberpunk world but the story gets distracting when there are writing errors or misspelled names/words. I would appreciate it if you would let me edit the story to fix those errors.

  • Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team Edit original

    Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team Edit

    Video Games ACTION R18 DARK TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI

    Welcome to Night City 2077! A land of amazing technological progress and horrible social inequality. Where extreme wealth concentrates and astonishing crime rates rise. Corporations, Street Gangs and Netrunners gathered in one place. What they have in common? Conflict. With conflict comes wounds and injuries. This is where Trauma Team steps in. But remember we ain't saints, we work for cash only. Rule 1: check their balance first! If you got the eddies Trauma Team has got you! Created by Abi Daulen, Edited by Me

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