i am by no means an expert in this but i have read many, and i mean many fanfics in this app and outside of it, and this fic feels pretty average, not terrible but also not great. The story is fast paced that i think i will forget what happened in just a day, like there's not even like a training stuff just some time skip then bam something evolved, there's also stuff with how their pokemon get caught it feels kinda force, so yeah fast paced. The dialogue also feels robotic sometimes dunno how to explain this it just feels like it to me. So all in all read it if you're just passing time and have nothing better to do . there may have some like fast paced tags in it and people may like counter well achktually me but oh well you win some you lose some.
Hikigaya Hachiman chuckled and said, "I refuse!"
COTE: Hikigaya Hachiman In The Classroom Of The Elite
Anime & Comics · JYouyi
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mebe this for guild name
sry internet corrupted me and this is what i imagine when i see swordfight
The three Farfetch'd looked at Pete with worshipping gazes as he placed the bowl down so they could choose their 'weapon'. Each of them picked one and they started a three-way-sword fight with their new spring onion. They looked weirdly agile and professional, but it was still a very derpy sight.
Pokemon: A life worth living
Video Games · Nuclide
then i will be here reading your works and see where this journey will go :)
thanks for the chapter! got a quick question will drifter get like a special weapon/class to use like kirito using two swords or will he stick to using spears?
stop laughing*
"Stop laughter and help me!"
Shattered: A SAO Tale (Sword Art Online)
Anime & Comics · Reis123
P.S. I still haven't decided whether it's Harem or not. But my original intention to write this story was because I wanted to write something that wasn't harem like my usual story, so yeah, the probability that it's not harem might be higher.
Extra in The Student Council
Anime & Comics · Lhometo
its good what else can i tell you. There's no need for super long essays just to ultimately say its good.
TBATE: The Emissary
Anime & Comics · DaoistvZHdIQ