Relief. That made me feel relief
I felt tired after inspecting every part thrice, I inspected every angle, dimension and the rune on each part. At first inspection, I come to across some mistake at a second and third inspection I didn't find any mistakes that make me feel relive.
Fantasy · AnWan
What about the protag onist plot armor? That shields from all damage for an hour. Seems like you have forgotten about it
This story has been quite the amazing journey, from the beginning to end it has been nothing more than a thrilling adve nture, thank you so much for this!
These chapters are way to short, also putting the bits of the ending part where you say to reach out is getting annoying at this point as it seems you are using it to fill up more words. Great read though
Brother good work, but really lets focus on theses typos and missing words. It’s starting to irk me. Literally, every single chapter
"Hm... just give them some space to sleep and some food, get them checked for diseases, oh I almost forgot, keep that pregnant girl in solitary confinement until we know what inside her. Clear?"
Fantasy · AkshatArpit
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
Great read sometimes drug on a bit but overall a great fun read
Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Fantasy · Elyon