Th first chapter was good but I feel like you could work on the flow of it more felt a bit choppy to read otherwise great work
Thanks for the chapter
Thanks for the chap
Thanks for the chap
That was a rollercoaster but why gruff why
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Smiling brightly, she raised the pistol, "I should actually thank my guard's sacrifice. If I didn't know that the bullet can injure one's eyes, I wouldn't have dared to try shooting at him."
Weapon seller in the world of magic
Eastern · Snowstar
He might be able to win any argument against his mother, but once she stared at him that way, his loss was inevitable.
Rise of the Crusader
Fantasy · KCharmee
Dang the chef felt that insult
"If we were in food wars, all of my clothes would still be on." Bianca said as she accepted a mint from Anna.
Blessed by Night
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
What show is this
It is led by this man, Enzo Valentin, the one who is blessed by not only Quetzalcoatl, but Tlāloc as well.
Blessed by Night
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
This is just what I think of the first chapter but isi don’t take it to heart
Rainbow Reflections: Love in All Shades
LGBT+ · dishaniseth07