I don't like being the pushy fan. however after reading, and being hooked, then waiting months for a new chapter. I've gotta ask... are you planning on finishing this series? I love this so much that I hurts not to find out the ending.
The air that he pulled toward him was a strange manipulation that Ventus knew well. In a burst of wind elemental mana and Walker's voice, a single word roared out. "PEACE!" This demand was a combination of wind elemental mana and dragon's intimidation.
Master of none
Fantasy · 1King_Rep1
I think the spelling is correct. considering he ended the thought talking about his daughter specifically. i mean Hector technically is not Edward's blood so is not an heir.
Rather than that, Billy was wondering if it was fine to let his kids follow the same path as them. It was rather dangerous, after all. He had talked with Edward about the possibility of one of his kids, possibly Christina taking his post one day, but in the end, that choice will be ultimately hers.
I Can Make Everything Level UP
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
•••THIS IS JUST MY OPINION AND I AM• ••LEAVING MY MOST HONEST• ••REVIEW FOR THE AUTHOR TO TAKE• ••CONSTRUCTIVELY AND ACHIEVE THE• ••BEST THEY CAN••••• so far to, where I've read, it's not terrible. the biggest flaw I see is with character development. like a skipping record the MC progresses and ends where he started. the world is gritty and realistic and there is beauty in the world building. the development of the story becomes stale only due to the fact of the MC's development. I have found few to no grammar mistakes which is refreshing on this site.
"HAAAAH! DIE! DIE! DIE!" Ollen shouted and then made dozens of Fireballs appear around him before firing them toward Billy.
I Can Make Everything Level UP
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Without wasting time, Billy made sure to level up that skill up to ten at least and then used it on his friends, just to be safe. The extra effect was really something else, after all. In any case, Billy thought of making the spell level up a bit more, but then he saw a sudden flash of light in the north. He didn't know what, but he knew that something big had happened… Eventually, Billy and the others saw some creatures flying toward the temple city… and Billy didn't like what he saw…
I Can Make Everything Level UP
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
While Billy was moving backward, wondering how come Svan managed to increase his speed that much and attack him three times before he could do anything, Svan charged again. He was capitalizing the momentum to the point where he even began to use his left arm as well. At that rate, it seemed that he began to punch as fast as Star Platinum…
I Can Make Everything Level UP
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Billy charged again, and this time he used Fierce Aura. His speed increased, and thanks to that, Svan barely could see the strikes added with the power of Quick Spear. Still, Svan managed to block strikes because Billy was aiming at his chest with every single strike. Svan began to be pushed away, and he couldn't do a single thing because even the numerous attacks had a lot of weight behind them. Svan also used Fierce Aura without any other choice, but he didn't end there. His brown skin began to turn red, and Billy could almost see the blood pumping in his veins a lot faster than before. His power increased, and he stopped being pushed backward. Thanks to that, Billy wasn't so sure if he could defeat him.
I Can Make Everything Level UP
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
"Aye, sir," Billy said and then looked around for a second.
I Can Make Everything Level UP
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Eddena was a twenty-nine-year-old looking beautiful unmarried woman. She had big plump breasts, white skin, slender legs, and a slim waist. Kadyn saw her beautiful, watery brown eyes and felt his heart raced. If he had to give her praise, he would say a single sentence: 'a dream of every teenager.' Kadyn knew little about her as she rented the neighbourhood only a few months ago and talked little about her personal details with anyone.
Magic Shop System
Fantasy · Eternal_Demon