Daoistinc1G4

Daoistinc1G4

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Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
16 days ago
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to make this short the synopsis is literally a one-to-one copy of "men in marvel:starting with a model body"and the worst part of it is this have a lower chapter number then the original copy that meant there is a good chance that they are copying the story from the original one

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
1 months ago
Commented

a mask can hide 100 faces and 100 faces can hide 100 truth's

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
3 months ago
Commented

how in the bloody hell a person don't know about God's if I know about it and I haven't even taken a course in it that how bloody coming is

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
4 months ago
Replied to Daoistinc1G4

Fair but I just not that comfortable seeing others characters it just to me put out the creativity I like my story to be in the experience of the OC not other people point view otherwise what the point of even having A OC plus I really enjoy the dungeon creation story you have there it was very interesting how the main OC is created their unique dungeon and use the different parts of the dungeon in a unique way

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
4 months ago
Commented

chair is none omniscient that word right ? but you would think a system that whole purpose is to help the house to at least have some functions like that at the very least at the beginning not the person can spend skill points on sure you're going to be expensive but it better than a personality change I still feel uncomfortable thinking about your personality changing

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
4 months ago
Commented

true it just well I'm just worried about you try to absorb someone and end up having the worst personality like for example that lustful personality one I still don't understand why anyone will like some personality like that a man picturing this like a drug situation like once you take a bite or take it you want more and more and more despite the side effects that's my worried or at least what back then which I can't really blame myself back then this personality seems to me a bit off like for crying out loud I feel like they're not even a hint of actual personality inside of him sometimes just simply killing not even a flinch

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
4 months ago
Commented

I just realized something if the system is omnipotent then wouldn't be possible to ask the system to I don't know fix those problems sure not the radley but like I don't know the artifact that help purifies the mind a skill that removes other personality for example

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
4 months ago
Replied to Mysticwolf

fair but it should be at least some logic into it like I can't understand where the character is coming from at least at the beginning he wants to be more efficient but the way he did it totally off I would at least expect him to I don't know first you learn about Rachel's at least master the basics of said and rituals create a ritual that would at least transfer tiredness to another creature being or I don't know modify the brain to make it as such sleep is unneeded for example or how about making a potion that would reduce the cost of not sleeping for multiple days not this method of splitting your mind into I expect this to really only work with masters of such quality to make this thing even possible much less a whole entire beginner

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
4 months ago
Replied to HopOffMe

picture means why I said this is well I honestly don't think it's ready yet I would like mine dungeon if I have one to be very secure especially it's going to my own life or pretty much is so I think that's why PS it has been a while since I read this so sorry if I can't remember the details but the thing I really hate most about is when they're Swiss characters or stretch piles per se I like to experience what the character have experience and stretching palms in my opinion ruins that for me so I like it when it first person base per se I guess per se

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4
4 months ago
Replied to Daoistinc1G4

this is for the guy who have the "lol"frame picture whatever is on the front you try to speak clearly using text to speech and I am way too lazy to proof we did so back at you Becca I meant to say baka there

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    everyone wondering what is this about this is about a guy who don't know how to properly write you signed to spray an ideas to other people and also complains about things like for example why do so many riders Miss gender down character like they were parts that went female there's call he or them main character male character called she and continue on for a couple parts it's always ticks me off there were one story that always ticks me off of that and who didn't meant to be pretty short so long so short maybe someone raise this along maybe crazy story maybe put there from the title of the book ( Ted) so some person could find what person stories about like I will always like to see someone create a story with my idea or concept into it it really interesting in my opinion so maybe take a look over it you are a writer be Foley if you are a rider who knows me you get a spite of it

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