Diamond_Blox

4 years ago

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This is my limited review for now the first few chapters needs some more proof reading and but as it goes on I can see the improvement of the chapters I really recommended this!

The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power

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Diamond_Blox

4 years ago

Commented

I really like the prologue it much more interesting!

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Diamond_Blox

4 years ago

Commented

Nice chapterr amazing

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Diamond_Blox

4 years ago

Commented

Deadth

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Diamond_Blox

4 years ago

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Keeep up the hard work author

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Diamond_Blox

4 years ago

Commented

LOL nice nice

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