Good start, changing povs between mc and heroine is a nice touch as it builds character well. Nearly perfect grammar and smooth dialogue makes it easy to read and become interested in the story. Keep up the good work author.
Thanks for the chapter
Thanks for a good chapter
Good chapter
Really like the story so far. Keep up the good work author!
Bro it’s a fan fic, he can do what he wants
Cadmus picked up the conversation, "At the last stage of the ritual a sacrifice is said to be required, supposedly for Death," he scoffed at this, "11 cold blooded murder is required to complete it. 11 unicorns, 11 Centaurs and 11 Wizard or Witch are sacrificed."
Legacy of Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Graviele
The money they had on them would not have been stolen
Out of the original six members, three were dead, one was in jail and the other was traumatized and quit after we returned to the base. The guy that set us up with the job hadn't talked to us about anything when he received the money, he was just gone in a day fleeing NY , a couple days after the heist I got transferred the money but I couldn't do much with it. The deaths caused the amount I received to be lower that normal and the fact that not everything that we stole made it back to the fence.
GTA 5 - Viper
Video Games · KAAS_Sad_Dragon
Laws are probably different, like the ‘legal’ adult age is 25 in this world. Author probably did it cause they weren’t comfortable writing NSFW with children in it.
"You do have some family remaining, though they are of questionable origin," Minerva muttered as she frowned. Ever since it was leaked by Lucinda that a new heir to the House of Black is alive, the battle for his magical guardianship has started. Headmaster Dumbledore had put a stop to it for now since Rigel was a Hogwarts student, but she knew the battle would soon start as soon as Rigel came into contact with the magical world.
Harry Potter: Ero World
Book&Literature · light_novel_addict
That’s the god I’m pretty sure
Brushing his beard at the thought August was curious about the Magical change happening in his direction unaware of what August felt was Silva gaining a boost through his own level ups infinitely growing stronger with each passing day…
FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
Lore accurate Courier
My thrashing around went on for who knows how long but eventually the black reality forced me to calm down and I told myself-no I swore to myself, 'I will kill that black and white checkered suit motherfucker, there is no hole on this rock that is dark enough to hide him from me,' and as I finished my vow, my sight ignited and the dark clouds were lifted.
Fallout: Still I Roam
Video Games · JoeLigma