you should remove the word actually. This sentence sounds like you're having a conversation with the reader.
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Fantasy · bearateme_
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man, this story got me so hyped that I want to keep reading more. I recommend keep reading. the author did a good job and I'm looking forward to a next chapter.
Urban · Night_Crawler619
he's not done with the mission. he has to upload the video to finish the quest
Level: 19
Fantasy · Drip
I love the story. keep up the great work. I'm still on chapter 1 but I got hooked immediately when reading a couple of paragraphs. I enjoy seeing more novels you create someday.
Fantasy · Toruu
they did that because family name comes first and their first name comes last while kai Carter is a mixed family of both from the refugee and Japanese but Kai family are a little traditional
Kudo Ayaka
Sci-fi · Fixten
Nội dung khiêu dâm Ghét hoặc bắt nạt Phát hành thông tin cá nhân Bạo lực Thư rác Khác
Webnovel
you should remove the word actually. This sentence sounds like you're having a conversation with the reader.
Death God's System
Fantasy · bearateme_