I found it quite ajarring the start of two separate chats right after one other. You then brake it up with what Qing does before writing her own replies, again, right after one other. How it is written it can be red/interpreted as being one continual conversation. Even when being tell it is two different chats.
[He Congrong: I have a four-piece bed set, cotton cores, pillow cores, and a two-piece pajama set, in exchange for 20 pounds of fish meat.]
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I found it quite ajarring the start of two separate chats right after one other. You then brake it up with what Qing does before writing her own replies, again, right after one other. How it is written it can be red/interpreted as being one continual conversation. Even when being tell it is two different chats.
[He Congrong: I have a four-piece bed set, cotton cores, pillow cores, and a two-piece pajama set, in exchange for 20 pounds of fish meat.]
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