Sounds like a good nights rest to me 🤷
Fifi's smile grew even tighter. "Decent night's sleep? You mean passing out drunk and snoring like a wild boar?"
Gangster to Idol
Urban · MiuNovels
TFC
Name reminds me of another novel about soldiers
"Mateo, Felix, this is Lucavion. He's new, but he's got potential," Garret said, clapping me on the back.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
I passed the cup as she took another sip before standing up and grabbing my hair, forcing me to drink from the same side of the cup where her lips had touched.
Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
"Why did... you try to rape her?" she choked out through her tears. "Why... did you try to rape Aunt Belly?"
Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
"Dude, what does he think he is, disrespecting you like this?" Folding his arms, Oliver mumbled in Ethan's ear. "If I were you, I wouldn't have let this slide."
Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Paragraph is copied underneath, personally I think the second one reads better
I guess u can replace all the ash with ‘I’ but I ain’t know how that would affect how smoothly the story reads
Ash von Agnus's POV
In The Shadow of Death: The Villain's Survival
Fantasy · Rayen_Yeager
Don’t know how to fix the problem either but just wanted to pint out the POV ain’t consistent. “I” is used along with Ash’s inner thoughts but then you also used Ash’s name to refer to himself-making it a first to third then back.
Ash von Agnus's POV
In The Shadow of Death: The Villain's Survival
Fantasy · Rayen_Yeager
The top idol on the billboard def got one too
"Then let me tell you," Fifi said, ignoring Cain's protest. "Us Idol Goddesses use Idol Points to increase our powers!"
Gangster to Idol
Urban · MiuNovels