Bruh the nation is desperate and struggling , but that’s all you care abt? Haven’t you had enough money already?
'Brutus and Lucielle are going down there? They'll ruin everything!' His thoughts echoed in despair.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
The story is really ii good, but I dont see a lot of character development of both the main and side characters. And that’s kind of a waste of potential. This is just my opinion, and the kinds of novels I usually like to read, so it’s up to you, ig. Perhaps, if you want to go in this direction, giving different characters’ pov and having some fluffs would help.
No,? I think the story is flowing nicely. And the world structure is solid good. You did a great job 👍🏻
Some of you might be upset that we took a break from the action, but we're gonna get to that soon.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Yes, it’s good to see inspirational mc’s. I learned a lot
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An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
That’s a huge buff tho, (in gaming terms)
Just a 25 percent increase.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Really like their relationship rn
Your novel is really good! I like reading it. It’s now my daily novel which I read often. Thanks for writing !
Hm sed
Author, I heard about what happened in Webnovel from YouTube. Is that why you stopped writing ? :(
How to Raise Your Regressor
Fantasy · Anit666