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_Donut_

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2020-06-15 đã tham gia New Zealand
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2 months ago
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I haven't captured everything this fanfic has to offer in this little review, but I hope it at least makes you interested in it

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2 months ago
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At first glance, based on the title, I expected this to be just another one of those fanfics where the MC goes around collecting women like Pokémon with an overpowered system—one of those third-rate stories you only read to kill time. But I was severely wrong. If you take the time to truly dive into this fanfic, you’ll discover something truly remarkable: Art. The character development of Ricky is a hands-down immaculate. From sleazy, cowardly, self-centered, debauched, miserable douchebag, who's unwilling to take accountability for his actions. To a man who has seen his own ugliness with his own eyes and wants to change. No. Not change. He doesn’t just want to change—I think he knows true change might never come. But BE better. The world-building is also amazing. Set in the world of Marvel, it captures the spirit of the 1920s era. From the family building with Ricky, Lucky and all the friends he makes and loses, to the racism with Black and Jewish folk, to the Crime Syndicates with Ricky slowly becoming more and more Integrated into the Luciano Family and major things happening ( i Aint Spoilling it), to the political and territorial power struggles; it shows it all in my view. The writing itself is crystal clear, and easy to follow, with only a few minor errors. Plus, new chapters drop consistently every 1-3 days is a bonus. Just give this a chance, you just might not regret it.

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2 months ago
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"...it's getting bigger!!", a colleague shouted seeing what started out as a speck turn into a mammoth sized, raging fireball, "RUN!!!"

Reincarnated as an Archangel in the Omniverse

Reincarnated as an Archangel in the Omniverse

Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon

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3 years ago
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Anime & Comics · Cerebro

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3 years ago
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+1

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Anime & Comics · Cerebro

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3 years ago
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"Didn't you want to finish that cooking anime though?" He said, opening the car's door instead of letting Kunishe do it.

MHA: A Cat's Story

MHA: A Cat's Story

Anime & Comics · WolfStar14

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3 years ago
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...A virtual kiss from your handsome author...

MHA: A Cat's Story

MHA: A Cat's Story

Anime & Comics · WolfStar14