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2020-06-13 đã tham gia Global
Huy hiệu 4

Moments 97
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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
Commented

THIS IS DEREGATORY. >:< #gavemetrauma #cancelled #freegrannyinnit #oldisgold #oldieisneverbaldie #basicbaldy

The old grandma joined in our laughter, her gentle voice ringing with amusement. "Ah, young ones, always finding joy even in the simplest of exchanges," she remarked, her eyes crinkling with mirth.

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading

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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
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Didnt understand ples expkain.

"Yes, it's time to venture further into the rain-kissed world," I replied, my voice carrying a tinge of wistfulness.

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading

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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
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OMG i 100% agree.

Aito turned to me, a curious glint in his eyes. "I think it's quite lovely," he said, reaching his hand out to feel the rain on his palm.

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading

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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
Commented

im bored this was my last resort worst than wattpad, would not recommend, gave me trama.

Aito turned to me, a curious glint in his eyes. "I think it's quite lovely," he said, reaching his hand out to feel the rain on his palm.

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading

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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
Commented

GOOD NAME jk

Listening to Aito's words, I felt a surge of optimism within me, a renewed sense of purpose.

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading

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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
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i LOVE THE USE OF RHETORICAL QUESTIONS

"What made it different for you?" I asked, knowing that he often noticed the subtle nuances of life that others might overlook.

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading

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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
Commented

wELL DONE YOU ARE SPECIAL

My heart clenched at Leah's innocent question, the weight of the truth bearing down on me. I took a deep breath, trying to steady myself before answering her, my voice heavy with a mix of grief and determination.

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading

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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
Commented

good use of your childs innocence oxmorons to the simile of the motif

"DADDY, LOOK AT MY SANDCASTLE!" Mia's innocent voice echoed from the other end of the line, interrupting their conversation.

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading

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Cookie_lover
9 months ago
Commented

nice vocab and good use of similes ~ your English teacher

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1 years ago
Posted

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