hope whatever your sorting out gets sorted well. your an amazing writer and this fanfiction is incredible and funny
This is a great story that I am really excited to read more about. I understand that the author had some trouble irl so they couldn't continue for a while, but I'm still excited and expecting this story to bloom into one of my favourite fanfictions on here!
it's a great story about a child protagonist who gets special training from his parents so he knows how to survive. what let's me down is the updating stability. it's an amazing story but it gets let down when it's not uploaded for a while with no explanation not reason why. if there was a reason then I Would appreciate being told but as they seemingly for no reason stopped for over a month imma have to drop. although if they start updating it again I'll come back but for now I'm dropping because there's no point in re-reading it when it's only got 12 when they quit
but is great already and would continue to read, whatever you decide to do
Could have more interactions with Luna (when she arrives) and Daphne. maybe more interactions with Ginny. since Harry and the three never interacted very much it was always just Hermione, Ron and the few times mouthoy (spelt wrong cuz idc to spell correctly) tried to mess with them.
not much of a spoiler btw but people sometimes just read the comments instead of the description which I don't get
if anyone has any other good stories that have Luna as the ML then i would be happy if you could recommend them to me here.
I'm loving the story so far, not many stories I've read that have Luna as the main love interest but I'm actually pretty happy about the pairing.
if they've already stated why they aren't updating I would like to know where
It's the Best Pokémon Fanfic I've read to date. i really hope this continues to be the best. I rarely read Pokémon fanfiction because it varies off course quite fast and by chapter 10 they're the best Pokémon trainer and are gods, takes the fun out of reading most of the time. But the way you write your story is really fleshed out and fun to read so I'm quite excited to continue reading this amazing (so far as of ch.6) fanfiction.
Pokemon: Randomizer!
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