Nihil_Est_Scriptor

A very amazing story, full of twists and turns that keeps you rooted in your seats, wanting to know more. I am a light hearted person and still, I can't help but read the novel, even if the main couple is toxic af. The characters are so interesting and very well written. The dialogue is not forced and it feels like the characters are actually alive. I liked the world building, although I don't think the author has fully shown the entire world to us yet. The writing quality is pretty good, with some errors here and there, but nothing too much to bring down the reader's enjoyment. The story development is amazing, the main character went through some crazy shit and I love how he changes during the course of the story so far. To all the new readers, grab on to your seat belts, this is going to be a wild ride. To the Author, thank you so much for this amazing book. Good luck for the future!

The story is really interesting and captivating. The writing is good and easy to understand. The story development seems to be well paced. The character designs are alright. The world background is also well written and mysterious. What I have to say is about the writing style. The author had made some grammatical errors in the chapters. For example, I would not see capital letters at the starting of a dialogue or maybe there would not be enough commas and full stops. The author is also rather straightforward with her writing. For example, the author does not explain much in the chapters, like showing us how the characters are feeling and the chapter also lacked some descriptive writing. Not that it bothered me that much, but some readers might like to visualize the whole story. I am writing this review after reading like 6 chapters or so; if the author does correct her mistakes in the later chapters, you all can discard my critic. Other than that, I really think that you should give this story a chance. It is very mysterious and captivating; it will keep you hooked. Author, well done. I wish you best of lucks!

The writing quality is good, although there are some grammatical errors. There are also a point of view change from one character to another, which really confused me. There are also notes the Author added and just said, 'Says the narrator'. It was a bit confusing for me too and disturbed the flow of the story. The story is very capitating, it was able to keep my attention for the whole 5 chapters published. The character designs are also well done. The world background is interesting and well written. There are only 5 chapters currently, so I cant say anything about the story development, but I can see that it will be good. The pacing seems good and does not bore us. All in all, I think this book is a good read. Looking forward to more.