No problem! I would definitely give ChatGPT a go, though. I believe you need to make an account, but it is great for correcting any mistakes or putting punctuation in place. You could also use Grammarly, but that is a subscription based service, but it not only assists with punctuation but also any grammatical errors too. It's a really helpful tool, I use it for help with my university lab reports.
"The song name is enemy I wanted you if you like it sing the song and if you succeed later give half of the money to me" I said which I really don't even care if he take the song for himself.
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This is some good use of punctuation. You made sure to end Edward's sentence with a question mark (?) since he was asking a question and correctly used a comma (I commonly have issues with commas as a native english speaker) There is nothing I can correct here, this is good.
"Why you didn't tell me before?" I ask, clearly annoyed that I could have mana but I didn't know
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What you could also do is use ChatGPT and ask it to "Punctuate the following: " and paste your chapter in afterwards. By asking it to punctuate your chapters, it takes away the added stress of deciding how much punctuation is enough or if you have used too much. It should also make it easier for you as someone whose first language isn't english. (If I am wrong, then my apologies. 12 hours ago was midnight for me, so I could only respond an hour ago, and I have not received a response from you about english being your first language.)
"The song name is enemy I wanted you if you like it sing the song and if you succeed later give half of the money to me" I said which I really don't even care if he take the song for himself.
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Once again, punctuation here would improve the quality of your paragraphs. It isn't too bad when they are just sentences, but when they grow in size, it lowers the quality of your writing. For example, I'm going to write two paragraphs. This should hopefully help you see how proper punctuation can make the quality of your writing better and make reading easier for your audience. With Proper Punctuation: "Scott Pilgrim vs. the World" by Bryan Lee O'Malley is a comic series that blends indie rock, video games, and romance. It follows Scott Pilgrim as he tries to win Ramona Flowers by defeating her seven evil exes. The series features a unique visual style and explores themes of self-discovery and relationships. Without Punctuation: Scott Pilgrim vs the World by Bryan Lee OMalley is a comic series that blends indie rock video games and romance It follows Scott Pilgrim as he tries to win Ramona Flowers by defeating her seven evil exes The series features a unique visual style and explores themes of self discovery and relationships It doesn't necessarily drag down the quality of someone's writing when they don't properly use punctuation, but using it can actually increase writing quality. Hopefully, that is helpful. 🫡
"The song name is enemy I wanted you if you like it sing the song and if you succeed later give half of the money to me" I said which I really don't even care if he take the song for himself.
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I would say try and add fullstops or commas (e.g, "Hello Edward, I'm Scott. Please come in, my sister told me about you.") I noticed it a little bit these past three chapters, but you don't tend to use a lot of punctuation in your sentences. That isn't to say that you Don't use them, but you aren't using them as often as you should, or using them correctly at times.
"I hope to meet him in person, can you give me his address?"
Rather than "You can travel anywhere anytime." You may want to instead use "You can travel to any other universe at any time"
I'm at university at the moment, but if I spot anything when I continue reading, I will make sure to point it out 👍
😂 It's no problem. I take it that English is not your first Language?
Oh, so you know about it, that's great then since you know what exactly it does. Yeah, ChatPGT is great for assisting with this type of stuff. Like I said just a moment ago, I use it for university work, and it is a total game changer.
"The song name is enemy I wanted you if you like it sing the song and if you succeed later give half of the money to me" I said which I really don't even care if he take the song for himself.
In scott pilgrim world and traveling to other worlds with a system
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