I recommend you to polish more your writing. The paragraphs are too long, some sentences don't make any sense between third POV and first POV, and also some sentences need corrections. Just saying, cause this first chapter looks really hectic.
I like how this is going for now. Keep going. Also, thanks for the chapter.
Yeah, sure. Hope you get well soon enough then
Thanks for the chapter. Hope this MC will be focused on himself only, caring only about how much benefits he could get instead of amy romance or caring for others. Good beginning btw.
Will the MC be willing to give anything is required to achieve his own goals? Including, for example, killing people 'he cares for', or something along those lines? If he's going to not be like a villain or be evil, then it's not my cup of tea. I'd like to see a MC that treats everything and everyone as his assets only... I wonder if this novel is like that?
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Of course its Li Shenxian.
Work, accountant.
Unknown, at least four chapter a week
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I am reading, so keep it up. It is decent for now, but I hope this doesn't contains a soft-hearted man or has him helping others out of nowhere... the same goes for romance of any kind. If this book ks going to contain any of these things for the MC then I'll be dropping. So if you could go straight to the point...