Bonb_Crusher

Bonb_Crusher

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Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
25 days ago
Commented

OH THE GOAT Chase my man

"Chase Lightwood, of the Lightwood family. We make great hunters if you ignore that we're shit hunters."

Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)

Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)

Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
2 months ago
Commented

where did she get her scythe ? she manage to keep from the begenning ? But even Samuel didnt manage to get a weapon just a broken shield

Claude looked up from the two young warriors. Behind them, Naz hopped down from the jungle cliffs and into the sandy beaches they occupied. She looked relaxed. Arms rested on the giant black metal scythe rested over the back of her shoulders as she walked over to them.

Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)

Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)

Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
2 months ago
Commented

Well , his heart skill should give him a boost to his element affinité , and the other a reduction to the other spicies animosity. I'm glad you choose to make him better at using his element , I alway through it was strange that he wasn't able to do anything with it before meeting sensei , when other were able to use their element at least at the basic level

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
3 months ago
Commented

So its the regular beast taper class , was thinking of the rare class of the twin from the previous version. Anubis is more in tune with the spectral wolf than fenrir I think. Happy to see thats a whole new novel , scared to see the same story with some tweak for more than 500 chaps . Thx for the chap as always

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
3 months ago
Commented

A monstruous snake ineed

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The week felt longer with a broken wrist. Claude couldn't do his usual fitness and training. He had to adjust. He had to ease up— conserve his energy, for what was to come. He even started dreaming about monstrous armored snakes with bladed whips for tails and poisonous iron-chunk swords for teeth. He'd never had to conserve his energy before.

Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)

Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)

Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
3 months ago
Commented

there she is , my beloved black spear

On his way out he heard the Gold Ranker ask to buy DuskBringer….

Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)

Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)

Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
7 months ago
Replied to Bonb_Crusher

there is something that bothers me with Emir, something that means that I cannot just hang on with him, he was created with the aim of being a weapon and has been training since his birth, therefore his mind and his abilities are justified. Maybe it comes from his opponents just not being strong enough, or something else. I just have the impression that they can overpower anything at this point, look at the fight with the salamander it's what you could call a close fight but yet I never had the impression that he was going to lose. Maybe that's just it, I don't feel like he can lose?

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
7 months ago
Replied to GoldenStache

thats what was bothering me. You clearly wrote emir with flaw , but I just dont feel them in any fight . He never make any mistake with his Time ability , can responsable to any situation with is ability (can fight long , close range , now he can even protect himself). Lack of experience ? he can bypass this with his ability, . He's often "close to death" but I never feels as if he can lose à fight. He just feel too strong and perfect in the way he fight. Thats just the impression he is giving me. And his lack of "personality?" with his lack of any error make him just feel like an inorganic being.I just dont have any attachement to him. Actually the scenes that i like the most are the on with his family , when they are some devellopement for him.

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
7 months ago
Commented

I finally understand what bother me so much with this novel, I never feel like there is a danger , i never feel atached to any character , Émir feel just to perfect no mistake in any action , no hésitation just power blazing any obstacle. after so many chap I finally know why I can't get into it . Émir just feel inorganic ,à perfect being with anecdotic flaw who tremple any opposent

Bonb_Crusher
Bonb_Crusher
7 months ago
Commented

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The man was a humanoid bunny. He was 2 meters tall, had pink fur, wore an eyepatch, and smoked a cigar. His rogue appearance, coupled with his frown and bulging muscles, made him stick out from the group.

Game's Villain Is The Evil Clown

Game's Villain Is The Evil Clown

Sci-fi · TheCringeGuy