Unnecessary wording, trying to use flowery words like symphony and what not just makes it a choir to read and ruins the immersion into the story. Just hurts the quality of the story and just feels wrong more then half the time. It doesn’t feel smooth at all, it just forced and used incorrectly.
I agree, really hope the author doesn’t keep filling paragraphs with flowery words. To me it makes it a chore to read. There needs to be a balance for me. To much makes it a choir to read. I don’t want a scene to read. He cut him with a sword but I also don’t want to read he swings his sword the air moves like a ocean filled with life while he ends a life of a man he just met as the blade moves to him I see the sadness of a man who new his life will end while dreaming of a tree that never grew. Just for that man to not even been named 😂 just a mob.
The story start off interesting but I gave up after 100. The author just straight up just start torturing the characters. It just one awful thing after another. The author literally straight up tortures one of the main characters till they end up mental patient. The mc seem to have no growth even past chapter 100 and he just spend most of his time having one mental breakdown after another. He know so much about the game but seem to become dumb. Like he has a extremely powerful ability he can’t control because of split personality and from the get go I trying to figure out why he don’t get the good version of the power to balance hisself out. There should be at least on person in the world that could help him try to control his issues but he just has break down after breakdown. I never understood authors that just love to straight up torture all the characters, like it just awful to read and would think it would be mentally unhealthy to constantly white stuff like that.
I don’t really understand what 9,45% is about
'So we lost about 9,45% of the Knights.' Nathaniel calculated.
Not-So an Extra
Fantasy · Admirably_
I think it more likely he didn’t bother because of politics
At this point I am just jealous
As soon as I fiished speaking all the girls I used the 'The Guild Leader' on started voicing out my evil deeds. There were more than 50 women. I did play with women's hearts but Dean is on a league of his own.
Game Villian In The Real World (Mentally ill Dark Mage)
Fantasy · Dark_Knight_Spider
This is just dumb……. Like what the point of this
He was wearing a black hat and a golden-black mask covering his eyes to his nose. The only thing visible were his lips and dark red eyes.
I Am The Game's Villain
Fantasy · NihilRuler
I think you have to boil snow before it safe to drink not 100% sure there though
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The New World Player
Fantasy · shadw
It is really bad, I am forcing myself to keep reading hoping it get better. I giving it a chance hoping it gets better, the novel holds promise.
Deliberate effort????? I pretty sure if I was being crushed I won’t be like I going to try to survive and not die by using effort without being deliberate. Using so much extra words for everything makes it where you just start skipping half of the paragraph
Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
Fantasy · RealmWeaver