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Darkfighter
male LV 14artist, 3d, RPG lover, anime lover, levels in anime and books are awesome the freedom to bring your character to his knees because of the lack of strength and a gauge you can read is very novel to me
2020-05-14 đã tham gia United Kingdom
really loved this read would love for there to be more
definitely
"You have a plan, don't you? Well, spit it out! You're seriously a bag full of cunning and bum-fuckery, aren't you?"
Rise of the Godking
Fantasy · KillerHemboy
love the word choice there bum ****ery haha 😄
"You have a plan, don't you? Well, spit it out! You're seriously a bag full of cunning and bum-fuckery, aren't you?"
Rise of the Godking
Fantasy · KillerHemboy
easy to explain: world domination system Please read and take it in this book has done justice to its name there's a few errors here and thier but that's to be expected
thats only a compliment to another words if someone used my words in there story or even a portion of the story it's self it would only be a compliment
Its very simple and in my opinion there's the odd error with words but other than that you have told a wonderful story so far. KISS Keep It Simple Stupid Sometimes the best reading is nice easy reading never think that you have the inability to write because you definitely do believe in your self. You have a lovely ability to keep it mysterious keep that it gives the reader more to think about. The way you delve into emotion is lovely you need to brush up on ways of explaining this don't be afraid to be repetive sometimes using the most common word is what makes it easy to read for us readers no thinking about whats going on only letting the story unfold in are minds with no confusion. How he made up his own path and stepped away from the systematic norm and broke free of his chains is need a lot more let him break all the rules let him dominate the world how he wants the way he wants it can be flashy it can be mesmerising it can be in the open bold and proud but it can also be the absolute opposite to dominate is to dominate in every aspect remember that there is no right or wrong way to do so.
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A Story of a man who has the option to save a world using the power from another. The only problem is will time change things. With a change of scenery and a vast learning curve a decision to ruthless or be kind, lose companions and forge friendships with AI helping him in his every move. The one thing to shock you will be time its self.16 Chs 4 sưu tầm
more more so enjiyable to read
Mages Are Too OP
Games · Soaring Flames