BlazeSpirit

BlazeSpirit

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Likes reading, sleeping and living (most of the time).

2020-05-13 đã tham gia British Virgin Islands
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BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
1 years ago
Replied to BlazeSpirit

Also Astral Apostle on Webnovel

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
1 years ago
Replied to BeguilingIncubus

In Loki’s Honor, Candlelit Lives, The Many Lives of Cadence Lee Not on Webnovel, but free to read on RR. Just google the titles and they should pop up.

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
1 years ago
Replied to Mvlexn

Any straight person would think he is gay, but canonically he is straight.

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
1 years ago
Posted

The characters in this novel are quite 1-dimensional and flat. The grammar doesn’t have mistakes normally, but that’s all you can expect from it. Definitely not mind blowing. The world, however, is so far pretty interesting. The system is pretty much what you would expect. It says not BL in the story description, but you can definitely tell the author is gay by how he describes the Captain. It feels like he’s really trying to make the MC not gay, but is failing miserably, since no sane straight person would think/act the way the Mc does. It might be an attempt at a running joke, but I haven’t found any of the ‘gay’ stuff funny so far. Overall not bad, but room for some improvement. (Not that I would be able to make anything better myself, it is much easier to criticize than create)

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
1 years ago
Replied to InnerVoice

Lmao are you even a person if you’re that self-centered? Joke is not funny because you said so I guess.

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
2 years ago
Posted

Seems like a great book, I just can’t deal with the grammar. It’s not unintelligible, but 9/10 times there’s a mistake in the sentence. Hope other people enjoy.

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
2 years ago
Commented

This hunger thing seems a bit out of nowhere. Maybe I didn’t notice it earlier.

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
2 years ago
Commented

It’s kinda cring when the mc says stuff like “I’m not the mc otherwise blah blah”

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
2 years ago
Replied to BadMindDarkRaven

I like it, it’s not revolutionary or anything. It reminds me of The Bloodline System.

BlazeSpirit
BlazeSpirit
2 years ago
Commented

Satan: I’m the evilest alive! This guy:…. Satan: I retract my statement