Gary_Whaley_III

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2020-05-09 đã tham gia Global
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Gary_Whaley_III
Gary_Whaley_III
5 months ago
Commented

I honestly thought somehow Danny was going to use the pharaoh for his vessel

Gary_Whaley_III
Gary_Whaley_III
7 months ago
Commented

Always take care of your mental health and take breaks as needed , I would personally suggest having chapters written ahead so if you need even a week off, you can take that time and still consistently release. Most readers are addicted(as am I) to great novels and this is definitely one of my favorites. I have lost interest in books , due to poor release rates and lack of development on the story. This is why I would suggest , consistent shorter chapters and keeping a reserve of content for those breaks you need. Very happy with this novel and it’s rate of development , so many different directions you can go, the nest can capture him, he can inadvertently take over the human alliance if they try to force him into there control , potential love interest with Alice . Seems like he could leave his friends behind at his current power increase rate. Danny can come back OP or crippled and stuck as his subordinate . He could betray humans as a whole. Personally I would like to see him explore farther into the jungle territory . Love your content , keep up the great work!

Gary_Whaley_III
Gary_Whaley_III
2 years ago
Commented

Great chap ter

Gary_Whaley_III
Gary_Whaley_III
Gary_Whaley_III
2 years ago
Commented

Good chapter, love the setup for the book so far

Gary_Whaley_III
Gary_Whaley_III
2 years ago
Commented

Naomi number one! Hare woul be goo as we lld

Gary_Whaley_III
Gary_Whaley_III
3 years ago
Replied to Eterna7_0ne

What is LLS ?

Gary_Whaley_III
Gary_Whaley_III
3 years ago
Replied to ThyUnknownSaint

What is LLS?