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Zaneninjacat
10 days ago
Replied to OveRlord

i am actually debating if i should add Mordred in the harem.. on one hand its i n cest.. on the other hand.. she's currently the person who loved Jaune the most and who know him the best...

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Zaneninjacat
11 days ago
Replied to Zaneninjacat

i also had to clarify this.. Jaune actually cares that he is had basically killed 2 people.. its just that he is having an existential crisis on why did he not care.. maybe its because i couldn't convey it better than i wanted to in writing.. but jaune does care that he killed 2 people..

And the feeling that I had done something worse than this also doesn't escape my mind because how!? I never killed someone before or done something much worse!?

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The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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Zaneninjacat
11 days ago
Replied to Zaneninjacat

typo fix "maybe adult Jaune wouldn't care"

And the feeling that I had done something worse than this also doesn't escape my mind because how!? I never killed someone before or done something much worse!?

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The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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Zaneninjacat
11 days ago
Replied to Aaden_

Jaune have a "feeling" that had done something "worse" before..... not as in he had killed an innocent before but as in he had done something worse rhan bashing somebody's head in... and you don't think Jaune would care killing r@pist.. maybe ADULT jaune would care but this is 12 years old Jaune.. he is not an ADULT who had seen how bad the world is.. this jaune is a CHILD... the most "bad" thing he had ever done is not even hurting someone, it was running away.. he lived in a town where everyone basically know each other and is practically the best place for children, ehy else would miles or luna let Jaune wander off to the town alone with no supervision since he was a child!?!.. i think you had read too much self insert or people that had been reincarnated/transmigrated... this jaune is 12 years old! not a guy who was 18 years old in his past life and reincarnated into jaune... i think it is safe to say that i had made it pretty clear that jaune is a reincarnation of king Jaune.. from the dreams.. that is where he get the feeling of dejavu from, but this reincarnation works more traditionally than webnovel's self insert reincarnation in which jaune have no memory of his past life or even knew he was a reincarnator.. i am not kidding but i am slightly annoyed that you expect jaune to think like an adult when he is a child! this is like the third comment that you expect jaune to think like you (an adult) and not a 12 year old or even a 7 year old boy..

And the feeling that I had done something worse than this also doesn't escape my mind because how!? I never killed someone before or done something much worse!?

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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Zaneninjacat
13 days ago
Replied to Aaden_

its like.. you know.. your feelings of lobe grows..

the sound of the last chains break and fall off, His body starts to glow white and circuit-like white patterns starts to covers his body as his love start to become even stronger.

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The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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Zaneninjacat
13 days ago
Replied to TheOneTruePanda

miles told Jaune about it in chapter 40, he doesn't say it in explicit detail but enough for Jaune to understand.

"And if you fake your death like leave a few strand of ripped clothes covered with your blood.. he would stop searching for you... or he would search for you but he won't have as much support cause the others would think that he is just a father that refuse to acknowledge that his son is death." Mordred explained to Jaune and she expect him to look at her with a proud expression at how genius her plan is, but what she found when she look at his face is a pale expression with an open mouth.

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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Zaneninjacat
13 days ago
Replied to TheOneTruePanda

he's 12.... none of us make the perfect decision when we're 12..

Does Jaune felt Guilty about it? Yes... but he must do this.. this is the only way... Beacon is no go, His father would instantly know that he had gone to Beacon...

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The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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Zaneninjacat
13 days ago
Replied to TheOneTruePanda

jaune being weak isn't the biggest reason why miles didn't let him become a hunter.. there are bigger reason for that..

"And if you fake your death like leave a few strand of ripped clothes covered with your blood.. he would stop searching for you... or he would search for you but he won't have as much support cause the others would think that he is just a father that refuse to acknowledge that his son is death." Mordred explained to Jaune and she expect him to look at her with a proud expression at how genius her plan is, but what she found when she look at his face is a pale expression with an open mouth.

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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Zaneninjacat
14 days ago
Replied to Aaden_

i was trying to make the scene more dramatic.. sorry....

the sound of the last chains break and fall off, His body starts to glow white and circuit-like white patterns starts to covers his body as his love start to become even stronger.

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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Zaneninjacat
14 days ago
Replied to Aaden_

the white forcefield? aura emit a forcefieldlike thingy around the body? and also stress and shock? imagine you chilling on a forest a see a huge ass werewolf like creature, you would prioritize not dying first and would not notice what the fuck is making you strong... and he is also 7 years old at this point in time.. his brain isn't fully developed yet... so yeah.. i guess i could had wrote it better.. but thankfully my writing had improved by a lot now compared to back then..

I open my eyes to the feeling of the pain greatly lessen and a white forcefield that has covered my body, At that moment i can finally confirm that the energy that has flowed through my body was my own now unlocked Aura, but i didn't got that circuit pattern again when i looked at my arm... but this confirms it that it is Aura..

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

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